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Don't Say Goodbye

Don't wake me up
Just let me be
In this place
That I call free

Your voice,
To me
Is a lullabye
Just leave me here
But don't say goodbye.

This doesn't seem finished to me...but comment if you like...

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On Friday December 30th, 2005, drop dead des (10) writes:

It may not be finished, but it has great potential.

On Saturday December 3rd, 2005, InsipidTouch (40) writes:

Yes, I didn't quite seem finished to me either. I think you have something going there though that you could really work well with. I like it so far but it needs a lot more work.

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