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All is not as it seems
It's a world full of dreams
A world full of schemes
A world based on themes
A world where tha tears
stream to lakes of fears
Feeding oceans of lies
waves powered by despise
and despite all tha tries
no one hears tha cries
blackballed outcast
Solidarity won't last
All that matters is pop
culture skids to a stop
tha cliff's edge then drop
to the rocks below
so it seems to go
So it seems
So it seems
as the truth prevails
leader speaks then bails
left tied to the rails
once blushed now pales
once hushed now yells
once touched now fails
Once real now seems
so it seems
so it seems




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On Saturday August 27th, 2005, glasshouse (801) writes:
"tha" really took away from this. though i gotta say i didnt find much in it anyway. so keep the "tha" if you like. -Glass


On Saturday September 20th, 2003, HeLlSeND (58) writes:
I got a one word reply for both of ya......but i'll be nice


On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (764) writes:
Hmm...


On Tuesday September 16th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (764) writes:
Awesome!


On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (764) writes:
(You know...we could run out of just one worded comments though...)


On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:
Never!


On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (764) writes:
Sure?


On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:
Positive!


On Tuesday September 16th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:
Fantastic(and so begins the one word comments on your work)...


On Tuesday September 16th, 2003, HeLlSeND (58) writes:
Great!!



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