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Culture

Dark and twisted- Wasted cells
Childhood, missed it- Raised in hell
Musta slipped, destined to fail
Pistol gripped, ready to bail
Mass confusion bringing rage
Disillusioned shrinking cage
Crumbles in upon a soul
Mumbles sin as dark as coal
See the truth for all the lies
Be the proof with blinded eyes
Attack facts to show their fiction
Buy fat sacks to ease addiction
Live a life of pure disgrace
Destroy strife and find a place
Where peace is all there is to see
Disease is all that comes for free
Love and joy once were nice
Broken toys and melted ice

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On Monday September 8th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:

I need to send in some money soon so I can put you almost to the top of my fav lists man...

On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

Look, you're already popular...make yourself at home. Just don't let it go to your head! J/K...again...I really like this poem also.

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, wilted (295) writes:

I'd have to say, i thoroughly enjoyed this piece. It's all written well and put together nicely. Nice to see some more talent here at dp... k.i.r.s.t.y.n

On Saturday August 30th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

nice write, i agree, beautiful flow, welcome to DP *~*aNDReW*~*

On Saturday August 30th, 2003, GothicBlack (269) writes:

well bravo for finding a new home here. And yes your poetry does belong with us. Mahaha! *snickers* ~gothic~

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, hate_doll (328) writes:

mm...I want a snickers...and to you, little hellsend, perfect flow and rhyme scheme and as bwb said, the structure greatly enhanced the concept...brava and welcome!

On Saturday August 30th, 2003, An Expired Member (50) writes:

wonderful. dave's write, you'll fit in here perfectly. keep posting, please, i am really eager to see what you post next. \m/

On Saturday August 30th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

I agree with the boys...I like this piece...great flow and the contrast of words adds much..Welcome to DP!

On Saturday August 30th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (421) writes:

as BWB said, excellent, and you will fit here perfectly, flows wonderfully and very fitting

On Saturday August 30th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:

excellent. the structure enhanced the concept, instead of cramping it, which i see so often on this site. well written.

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