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"A Mother's Wish" by Crystal Passion

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Linen rags that flowed like water
Haggered draped on fragile shoulders
And bending just before the breaking
A bag of bones that carried her
Heartless faces only saw through her
None to match the painful gaze

She knows she has no future
She knows there’s no recourse

But faith is all shes ever known
She thrives on each purposeful sunrise

Lonely companies those of pain
And offers none to solace


If faith gives hope to no one
She has but one last breath
Which perhaps she can surrender to time
Atlast receive her gift…

But such a wait
Is eternal long
For a baron womb
That can bare no daughter
And bare no son







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On Monday September 20th, 2004, suicideseason (2102) writes:
_my god...what incredible pain...you rendered this emotional heartbreaker perfectly...it took my breath away.damn.


On Thursday August 5th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (747) writes:
Wonderful flow and feel to this one - the ending was the perfect contrast to your title. Lovely! Ciao, T/S


On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, SilentStalker (1316) writes:
...okay, this is not my usual...this hit hard and dug in deep...the painful discovery of such a unattainable opportunity...horrific... -Darun


On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:
The last stanza was devastating.. so heavy with hard cold reality and emotion, each line a stab in the heart. Amazing work.


On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, Soulseeker (119) writes:
Very impressive... so much saddness.. so very insightful... Bethany


On Wednesday July 28th, 2004, glasshouse (771) writes:
The surface of this is tragic... though I feel it deeper than that. Your words flow like brandy, I'm impressed and saddened by this piece. -Glass



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