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"Christine's Whip" by Crystal Passion

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Crafted leather
Tightly braided
Slightly worn
the seams have faded

Three feet long
From tip to hilt
A work of art
Expertly built

And her smooth hand
So strong and steady
As I laid still
Bare-skinned, and ready

then tracing slowly
My naked side
Her senna whip
A painful collide

Screams of pain
Overcome by rapture
I was the prey
And she the captor

Stinging cracks
Leave their mark
Her timing precise
Her motions sharp

Now seeing all that
She had done
She licked my wounds,
Her passionate tongue

Then laid her toy
Above my head
And forced me farther
Into the bed-

-by all the weight
that was her own
bodies sweating,
I hear her moan

Her electric glaze
Never leaving mine
Her toxic touches
Having crossed the line-

-from friends to lovers
the choice we made
and no regrets now
 since that day

and it's still hard
to remember when,
the time before her whip
licked 'cross my skin.




~*~ Dedicated to Christine, she's swell ~*~



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On Thursday January 27th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (321) writes:
Lovely lovely lovely!!! Thank you for writing this. So sexy and sensual and passoniate. Simply bliss... So sexy almost made me wet... ~*Kitty*~


On Monday June 21st, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:
Yeah, I can say that this piece is insanely well done. But I could be a litte bit biased.


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (860) writes:
ohhh...i like this lots...i can relate...it went bad tho...oh well i like this alot kya


On Monday June 14th, 2004, Crystal Passion (257) writes:
yeah, this one went bad recently.. *sigh*


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
:O .... how many times did i opem my mouth with a gasp... how many stanzas are there in this poem... same question. major wow, kryz. what can i say? you rule.


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
"and it's still hard" ... yep, sure is ^_^


On Monday April 19th, 2004, Markus Porkwing (712) writes:
Jesus Christ on a popsicle stick, I didn't know you were bi? Mmmmm you yummyliscious asian you!!!


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Bast (899) writes:
aww, lovely! girls in leather are so much better. ::Grin::


On Sunday April 25th, 2004, Crystal Passion (257) writes:
prrrrrrrrr


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:
Mmmmm I want to feel the lash of a whip....very hot piece here babe..always enjoyed...*lix*


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, Drea (938) writes:
Oooo logged in just to comment. Princess, looks like you have been having fun. Hummm, maybe there might be room for another Princess? *giggles* This was a HOT write. I love the flow.


On Friday April 16th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:
this was great - original rhyme, great format... I can feel the sting as I read it.


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, Seraphic (290) writes:
hot...this was hot and oh so very sexy, nicely done. *smiles* I've got to read it again....I need a meeting with someone and their whip now :) *~seraph~*


On Thursday April 15th, 2004, _Andrew_ (298) writes:
excellent, i think i have a boner


On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:
oh my....goddess.. I mean goodness. :::OLd


On Tuesday April 13th, 2004, worm (131) writes:
I'd really like to come over and watch, but my pacemaker would probably burn out! wait a minute, hun! if I went out that way at least I'd be smiling!


On Wednesday April 14th, 2004, Crystal Passion (257) writes:
WORMIE!!! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?? *SHAKES FINGER AT YOU*


On Tuesday April 13th, 2004, SilentStalker (1355) writes:
...um, can I say Hell Yeah...? oh wait, I just did...so, when can I come over...? lol -Darun


On Tuesday April 13th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
o0o0o wow...this is great!!~slave


On Tuesday April 13th, 2004, Crying_Banshee (75) writes:
heheh =) nice i like it..



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