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Surrender

Spinning, whirling out of control
The off key balance that prevents
My mind from staying afloat

Sustaining the vertical fortitude
Rooted limbs that brace
..The melting shell
TO
THE
FLOOR

Reaching out for the body that binds
The shackled vessel
Locked within a stolen chest
That few are sworn to see

A rock to hold
As support gives way
To a million emotions

-Burning into that
which holds me steady

when at last forgotten breath
had been steadily taken
my eyes are turned to you

reaching the piercing layers
hidden beneath the glassy glow
within your eyes

I never knew you wanted me too.

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On Friday June 24th, 2005, An Expired Member (7) writes:

This is great how in the hell everyone spits out shit like this is beyond me but keep it up

On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, frozen (748) writes:

Simply beautiful. I really enjoy your work.

On Saturday January 15th, 2005, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

I was just glancing over my old works. This piece takes me back... I miss him so much.

On Wednesday February 11th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

you are amazing, girl!

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

i lvoe how you closed this kryz, very nice write >>

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

thank you drewby

On Monday December 1st, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:

Amazing, just amazing, i like this alot, then again i like all your works ~Emptyness~

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

awww Josh you are a great person

On Saturday November 22nd, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:

Its Been Ages Since I Started Reading Other Peoples Work... And I Am So Glad That I Started With This One! Great. GPhD.

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

captain!! i havent been around in a while and coming across your comment was a wonderful wb!! :D

On Thursday November 13th, 2003, OLd SouL (837) writes:

I truly enjoyed reading this. Some powerful words and emotions locked in this one. :::OLd

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Whoa i like the use of fonts.Some dudes can be bastrds.noticing by what you've done in your profile, it makes me ponder what people would quote me by heh.-Kefka

On Thursday November 20th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

you always flatter me with your comments kef :)

On Tuesday November 4th, 2003, SilentStalker (1341) writes:

...amazing...what can I say, Kryz...? I love your writing... -Darun

On Tuesday November 4th, 2003, Lydia Jade (790) writes:

your words are so pretty ~soons~ i wish i could write as good as you! ~Lydia~

On Tuesday November 4th, 2003, Drea (934) writes:

i like this princess. i can relate to it. great read. amazing write. ~Drea~

On Monday November 3rd, 2003, WinterGrave (337) writes:

dont go get yourself hurt now...guys have thing about hurting girls and not thinking nothing of it.~~~Grave

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, Six-Out (1824) writes:

New interests are always fun...but you always hope they last...yea.

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

where ahve you been?!?!

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