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Tears of Gray

Tears of gray, tears of pain
they burn their stain into my cheek
but yet i wonder
why
tears of life, tears of joy
refresh my skin with their healing touch

my baron embrace, my empty heart
construct the confines of my mobile prison
but you cemented the walls together
my decision, my own undoing
destroy the prospects of a joyous reunion

I searched continuity in your adoration
you said youd love me hold me forever
and from my hunt, I came up short
and
discovered that
when you said you loved me
you meant fornever

Tears of life
Tears of pain
Tears of joy
Tears of gray

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On Monday December 8th, 2003, Raven (367) writes:

This made me think (which is quite a feat in the morning) tears are grey because they cannot be clearly for one reason... _Raven

On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

well, i have to say, this is very good. the way its written, whats was written...all of it! very nice.

On Saturday September 6th, 2003, fuck you (30) writes:

Very sad and a very wonderful write...

On Friday September 5th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

you still dont see... *sigh* alas im the bad guy *~*aNDReW*~*

On Friday September 5th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:

I can think of a buch of things to say of this poem, all good of course. But I know it would do no justice. Thank you for such fantasic writes. I need your talent...

On Friday September 5th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

saddening, though I really like the ending.

On Friday September 5th, 2003, Markus Porkwing (708) writes:

Now I know why you never smile. It's hard to smile. It's like having really dry skin, if you tense, it will crack a bloody smile full of pain.

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

first one i have read of yours, im impressed, your ecnomy of words, your well chosen words.......well done ......urban

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

i am speachless...

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:

i like this poem

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

This had a calming effect on me, yet a sad one too...'tears they stain into my cheek'...i can only imagine ur pain inside.

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, worm (131) writes:

kryztal... the tears we cry allow us to cleanse our hearts... or not! there is a certain sadness here... this was sung with a sweet voice! worm

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (12) writes:

This is good stuff.

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (12) writes:

that comment was just too small, i had to add something.. I like the flow, the lack of ryhme, or the minor amount that there was made this poem much stronger. And fornever, quite clever

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

behind the tears you made me smile :)

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