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"Beautiful Goodbye" by Crystal Passion

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Hungered for your love
Thirsted for your passion
Written in the fine lines of my face
Mirrored in the reflective tracts of my eyes
My intentions were clear
Yours were blurred by the watery ripples of uncertainty
of which cautionary symbol my weak heart chose to waver




Foolishly I took love's fatal leap
blindly I reached for some solidity
only to fall into the ravine, a mere toddler step from the cliff's edge
if only the safety net of your adulation had been under me
my fragmented body would be whole today




You were my rock, my supportive backbone
and all that you left was a puddle of broken promises broken dreams and a broken me
so here I am amidst a jaded dream that you would return
but you arent to be had for the wanting
my attempts at pursuit would only play catalyst to an untimely demise





Tonight I release you from my haunted thoughts
I need to mend, I need to heal
My hands are empty of their clinging grasp
Turn away now and leave me the pieces to nurse alone
Time has now arrived...




for your beautiful goodbye...





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On Thursday December 20th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (388) writes:
usually poems of this nature are a hit or miss, with the majority going to the latter, but this is eloquent! It is emotional without going completely overboard! I Love It!


On Thursday October 30th, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
This is a beautiful and well writen poem, i have never read anything like it, it is extremly sad yet fills the person reading it full of hope at the same time thru your strenghs, at least thats what i feel when i read it, very good work.~Emptyness~


On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, Bluegirl (247) writes:
The strength in this piece is wonderful.


On Thursday September 11th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:
Very Nice Write!


On Friday September 5th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:
Nicely done and so well written. You were a fav of mine from the begining. And shall remain one untilthe end. Or until you write a bad piece. Which should never happen...


On Friday September 5th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:
*knocks on wood*...


On Friday September 5th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:
A very well done right, I think I shall read more.


On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:
i cant help but feel more idiotic... heh


On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
It is a very well-put write...your words have wonderfully fit inside the whole message...beautiful ending aswell.


On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, angelunderneath (75) writes:
very nice!


On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, Markus Porkwing (713) writes:
love can bloody the finger tips, for we tend to hold on too tight.


On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, worm (131) writes:
well said and beautifully written! I especially liked, "my attempts at pursuit would only play catalyst to an untimely demise"... this sentence alone, speaks volumes! nicely put! worm


On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:
i loved it i really can relate



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