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I Thought About You Today

I thought about you today...

always searching,
never finding-
the treasured love I lost
when you chose to leave

I thought about you today...

The day you left
darkness encaptured me.
Like a deteriorating disease,
it slowly ravaged my body
until all that was left were my final breathes...
tiny whispers ready to escape my lips at any moment.

I thought about you today...

You are my candy coated drug.
Sweetest on the outside,
but a dangerously explosive mixture on the inside,
which in large doses would become more deadly
than any other caution found within this hazardous world.

I thought about you today...

Ironic it seems
how that now you want to go,
I make you my priority.
When I had you, I neglected you.
When you left me, I stalked you.
What more can I give?
The world would be such a diminutive price to pay
for the most valuable lover of my life.
Just need only one lifetime in your arms....

I thought about you today....

but...

Didn't you know?

that today...

is everyday

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On Sunday December 23rd, 2007, italianbella (303) writes:

outstanding write:)

On Monday April 2nd, 2007, An Expired Member (43) writes:

awww I loved this it was very sweet:] favs indeed:]

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, merih (15) writes:

awaked so many memories - what painful yet pleasurable memories - thanks for your post

On Saturday June 17th, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (233) writes:

this captured my every attention. i feel the same pain, almost EXACT same pain....and your style of writing reminds me of my style in a way...i really like it.

On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (18) writes:

I like this!!

On Wednesday June 8th, 2005, An Expired Member (9) writes:

that was a beautiful work of art, excellent.

On Friday June 3rd, 2005, Yesterday (27) writes:

This is awesome. Just literally awesome. So beautiful and amazing, I'm honestly speechless. I think I'll fav this.

On Thursday June 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (21) writes:

I love it!!!

On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:

this was beautiful in its aching...the painful yearning of that which we lost..you portrayed it with flawless grace ~kristy

On Thursday May 26th, 2005, void (49) writes:

amazing write i can relate to this. ~V~

On Wednesday May 25th, 2005, Serenity (600) writes:

"I thought about you today.... but... Didn't you know? that today... is everyday" That line fits perfectly. Amazing write :)

On Friday May 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (5) writes:

"You are my candy coated drug. Sweetest on the outside, but a dangerously explosive mixture on the inside, " i love this line and the way you expressed such love but then again the hate that you have for taking it

On Monday October 11th, 2004, Valentine (510) writes:

This is curiously haunting and devouring with it's tender scent of yearning and sadness. It seems a fragility that should be held with care. Very tearful but rather irresistable. Masterly expressed. ~*~ Rose ~*~

On Saturday September 4th, 2004, An Expired Member (18) writes:

wow...i like the way you expressed your love but hate at the same time this touched me and i can relate

On Saturday August 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

this was very deep very depressing great word usage this in one word was amazing

On Friday July 30th, 2004, wilted (310) writes:

"just need only one lifetime in your arms" i love that line because it's exactly how i feel right now. Lovely work.

On Sunday July 18th, 2004, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

I like this! I sometimes have days like that, not always though.

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, Lexicon (43) writes:

This piece was awesome, for lack of a better term. This reminds me of so many other things in my life.

On Monday May 24th, 2004, aXe FactoR (429) writes:

was listening to a sad chinese love song while reading this piece. both this poem and the song almost brought tears to my eyes. i really liked the last 3 sentences. the emotions were raw and so heartfelt. awesome. just awesome.

On Tuesday February 24th, 2004, Antony (44) writes:

I have a poem similar to this, but probably not half as well written. It's funny how you can't really open your eyes until you're forced to.

On Wednesday November 19th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

I likes. It speaks to me ;)

On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, DarkDruidess (206) writes:

This really grabbed my attention...of course it fits my life right now...I don't know whether to thank you for the tears it brought but this is a wonderful poem full of emotion....

On Thursday October 9th, 2003, An Expired Member (12) writes:

That was smooth. I can dig it.

On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:

I Thought I Commented On This... Curious. Anyway To Be Brief: I Liked. GPhD.

On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:

when there is this much commentary, it seems almost without point or substance to even say anything, but if it makes a difference, its a beautiful piece that made me want to cry and laugh at the same time.

On Thursday September 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (8) writes:

i liked it...really i did

On Friday September 5th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:

So sad. You left me sad. Now I have go read something that will make me happy again. I enjoyed this piece because of that...

On Friday September 5th, 2003, Twilight (2104) writes:

i loved the ending. very nice. it made me feel..uplifted. very well done.

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, OLd SouL (838) writes:

the next time someone says I thought about you today, I swear I'm going to flip out. Actually, I'll just smile and think about this poem. Thanks.

On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

The next time I see someone flip out I shall smile and fondly think of you too Soul :D

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, Markus Porkwing (706) writes:

A very moving love poem. The ending summed it up swell. Yay!

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

this is really really good. its sad to see that you missed the opportunity to be with this person further, but once you lose something, it is unsafe to dwell upon it. hopefully the poetry helped relieve some of it.

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

believe it or not I appreciate and value your opinion

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:

i know it does when i write when im sad. :)

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, fuck you (30) writes:

I applaued this piece...

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:

I really liked the powerful ending. "Didn't you know that today is everyday" Great write and look forward to reading more of yours in the future ~Urban Shipwreck~

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:

Very good! Yeah I did see the style before... I like the candy coated part!

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

beautiful kryz, couldn't help but notice the style as well, hehe, nice write *~*aNDReW*~*

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

I had the best inspiration from a particularly powerful old flame...

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:

lovely start. keep this up and youll be a great asset to the site. i like it when people have vocabularies. i just pretend thesauruses dont exist and everyone actually knows all these words. and if they really do know them, then theyre extra cool. and if

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:

they dont, then i dont care, because im out of my mind. good job. -B

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:

i think i misspelled asset... -B

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:

Quite good. The verse starting "You are my candy-coated drug" caught me for some reason...

On Tuesday September 2nd, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

LoL It was the candy wasnt it?

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

very nice, liked it much, , , O.

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

Beautiful and enjoyable to read...flowed with excellent repitition!+Fallen One+

On Sunday August 31st, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

keep it up!

On Saturday May 1st, 2004, anth (1612) writes:

just stunning, to capture these thoughts and portray with such flowing beauty, the continous theme and the ending further enhances how special this poem is

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