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i could die

if i could only get a sample of what it feel's
like to have you in my arms
i could die tomorrow.
and in the midts if my confusion you
tell me you in love
i could die today.
but this love my lost soul prays for
to be at your side forever although
tomorrow never comes.
if you could only answer my hearts question
and hurt me not inside
then with out a doubt
i could die right now..

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On Sunday March 6th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

love is just something else in the world to fuck people up over.....nice write though

On Wednesday May 19th, 2004, Juggalotus (73) writes:

Very reminiscent of somethis that happened to me not to long ago. It turned out pretty shitty, but I can tell you about that later. I know where you're coming from, this is a good piece.

On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

I love the subtle progression. Quite marvelous. "tomorrow never comes". -Sue

On Monday April 19th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (488) writes:

beautiful!!!

On Sunday April 18th, 2004, Drifter (356) writes:

i know the feeling... too well actually. "D

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