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So now I understand...
Lost, now a broken man.
I learned what it means to hurt
To lose..
I stand here, another one who's lost it all
Wondering what the hell's happened to me.
To fall away and be forgotten
Can kill...
So I'll look away as you do, lest
I become another lost soul on this plane
Trying to cling to something that is
No more...
It's hard to comprehend our ways
So lost are we in such a daze
That we try and take what is
Not ours...
Give it back and now it's gone,
Clinging to something ideal, though
Nothing's left except the sad,
Sad song...
To fall away and be forgotten
To break away and lose yourself
To want to yell for lack of voice
To hate life and it's solid ground
To reality and the toughest choice
To take my life or live tonight.





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On Monday June 26th, 2006, mywristshurt (511) writes:
... wow your emotions just picked up on me and practically threw me against a wall.. if this was a free write, i'd be more enthusiastic about one that you actaully took time to think of.. great job


On Tuesday December 21st, 2004, HeLlSeND (58) writes:
Trying to cling to something that is No more is purely what life is for, for the only thing you can grasp is death, and only at your last breath


On Friday April 9th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
I totaly agree with sole.. thanks a bunch man :O) Monkey


On Sunday February 29th, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:
this piece is such a great write, absolutely stunning, good job ~Emptyness~


On Saturday November 15th, 2003, sole (114) writes:
Such a raw and powerful write, I enjoyed it.


On Saturday November 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:
whether it is liked or not is immaterial. The line about looking away... really hit home... thanks for sharing this, man.


On Friday November 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:
absolutely breath taking..truly. i enjoy the realisim you've put in this.. at least it feels that way. in short: it was wonderful.



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