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Inner Struggle

Left to fall away
Into the dawn of another dead day
Every night I wonder what pulled me through
The answer obvious, for that's what you'd want me to do.
Though I can no longer touch you in our bed
No longer can I dream of us two wed;
I do it all for you.

The knife, the posion, the rope, the gun
All so tempting, but I'm not done
In this life, no not just yet
Wait for me there love,
Behind the sunset.

All these things that pull me through
None for me, I do it for you.

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On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Lotophagi (446) writes:

like a kind of melancholy motivation..... lovely write. Thank you.

On Friday October 8th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (821) writes:

Sad, but hopeful...wonderful... Kya

On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (30) writes:

wow its just so real, and sadly beautiful...very good job

On Thursday July 8th, 2004, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

beautiful, well spoken....................urban

On Saturday March 27th, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:

wow really deep and very sad and heartfelt i like to it seems to have a sense of pasion and love. i like this one a lot. ~darlin :)

On Friday March 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:

I can't quit commenting your work.

On Sunday November 9th, 2003, Moodswing (72) writes:

sad but sweet...and i know the feeling all to well...

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, gothemite (398) writes:

aww good poem, it's cute(ish)

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (16) writes:

really good word choice-bravo

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (43) writes:

*The knife, the posion, the rope, the gun..All so tempting, but I'm not done* nice one!!

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

Wait for me there love, Behind the sunset. Nicely done X.. I feel it.. dadada monkey

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