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      As I watch everything fall to the floor,
                             hit the ground,
       and scatter all around until it can’t do it anymore.
             For know I try to pick everything up.
                    But there is too much.
            I shall go insane because of this.
                 For I can’t get all my memories back.
              They fly around,
                   like a whirlwind inside my head.
               Projecting themselves to make me go insane.
        They confuse me.
                      In every way.
               The more I try to stop them the worse I get.
     Now I don’t know if I can be safe.
 As I watch everything fall to the floor.
                                    Written By:
                                       Xavier



Copyright 2003 Xavier

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On Monday October 6th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
WoW! lol I think this is good and I don't see why Morgue is gettin so pissed, so what u used 2 lines, sometimes we need insperation and listening to music is a great way to get it! Good Write by the way.


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, Unbridled Pain (65) writes:
dammmmnnnnnn!!!


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
Thanks.


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
Not only did you copy the lines, but you copied the tone and the idea of the song. Sure, only two lines are DIRECTLY copied... but you also write about memory, etc. FYI, stealing ideas is also plagiarism.


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
Here are the lyrics to the song: From the top to the bottom Bottom to top I stop At the core I've forgotten In the middle of my thoughts Taken far from my safety The picture is there The memory won't escape me But why should I care (2x)


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
There's a place so dark you can't see the end (Skies cock back) and shock that which can't defend The rain then sends dripping acidic questions Forcefully, the power of suggestion


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
Then with the eyes shut looking through the rust and rotten dust A small spot of light floods the floor And pours over the rusted world of pretend The eyes ease open and its dark again


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
see it right through you (7x) Bridge (2x)


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
Chorus Bridge: In the memory you will find me Eyes burning up The darkness holding me tightly Until the sun rises up


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
Floats on down the street till the wind is gone The memory now is like the picture was then When the paper's crumpled up it can't be perfect again Chorus Bridge Now you got me caught in the act You bring the thought back I'm telling you that I


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
Moving all around Screaming of the ups and downs Pollution manifested in perpetual sound The wheels go round and the sunset creeps behind Street lamps, chain-link, and concrete A little piece of paper with a picture drawn


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:
oh my umm it seems morgue isnt happy w/ u at all, not bad i never really listened to that song so i cant say i recogize it but if u took more then a few lines from it not good but other then that not bad


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
The original song was "Forgotten," track 10 on the CD "Hybrid Theory."


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, DarkAyla (57) writes:
Oh My!


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
Originally written by: Linkin Park.


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, Xavier (1) writes:
Guess what I only use the fist two lines from Linkin Park. Ever thing else is mine if you would read Linkin Parks Lyrics you would find that out. So what are you going to say about that!


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
I'm going to say that if you copy more than 5 words or oterhwise clearly copy part of a previous work, what you're doing legally falls under plagiarism.


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
P.S. - Delete this shit before I report it to DarkPoet, and write your own freaking words. Why bother posting something you didn't write? You're wasting everyone's time, including your own.



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