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Forever

how do you make a hug last forever?
hold them tight and leave you never

squeese them hard and kiss them softly
tell them how you'll miss them awfully

with tears in your eyes and a shaky voice
you profess your love, but its their choice

cut them loose and set them free
if they come back it was ment to be

if you leave now and I see you never
how do you make a hug last forever?

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On Sunday March 11th, 2007, Ainsof (1838) writes:

wow... short and to the point.. nice... I gotta get back to you.... but I'm thinkin it don happen right now, truth in small words!

On Wednesday December 14th, 2005, LordBrosnian (64) writes:

I don't like hugs...I like slugs

On Tuesday June 7th, 2005, Twilight (2099) writes:

too many things like this...but the flow is pretty admirable.

On Tuesday June 7th, 2005, Sin (1637) writes:

this is so beautiful and touching...as sad and heartfelt things usually are ~kristy

On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

My mom has written me something similer to this, when I ran away...This is very nicely written. -fairy-

On Thursday March 4th, 2004, Antony (44) writes:

The feeling I got once I read this poem was very strange. I like it (the feeling) and love the poem. It's going on my favorites. Infact, I'm going to read it again! =)

On Sunday March 7th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:

me too i'd totally read this again and again and again.. your poem makes me recall those painful moments.. -lime.

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:

catchy, in a sad way. I've never been a fan of the 'if they come back it was meant to be' deal, though. seems to me that it has a lot of holes in it. the poem itself was a fun read, though - kept my attention

On Monday May 19th, 2003, Twilight (2099) writes:

i like this poem. it is heart felt and i can tell you truly feel what you write. good work.

On Friday April 11th, 2003, Lady_Ahz (80) writes:

I don't know how many times I've read th is poem, but every time I do... It still holds the power to make me cry... Haven't heard from you in a while. How are you doing?

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