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heinous acts shall sing no more
in your ravenous game of love and war
that sorry we share has merly begun
but remember love, my heart has been won

shut your mouth, say no more
the visions of you, should be no more
there you left me, slamming the door

heinous acts have sung once more
your ravenous air is a clouded blur
you've slurred your words
you've made me sore

you've bruised me up, and used me too
Shh! don't say more
please yourself, slam the door
but if you go, i'll be no more

heinous acts shall sing no more
your ravenous love, it stings and burns
escape me now
then go home



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On Thursday December 23rd, 2004, Astra Dei (632) writes:
I like the way you move through your piece, while still remaining centered.


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, batman nipples (2243) writes:
I love the flow...Mute's comment is perfect for it.


On Sunday April 18th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:
Again, another peice where you repeat fractions of lines and i absolutely love that. you take a constructed fragment and twiddle with it over and over... much enjoyed.... MUCH. Mayor of Chump City


On Sunday April 18th, 2004, Exodus (210) writes:
Wow....I liked the flow of it....very nice work...



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