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The Painter

rectangular depictions
dripping in gold frames

eyes transfixed...
inhaling every fiber
absorbing every stroke

the center of the iris of the eye
contracting...
expanding...
in microscopic equations
weighing...
measuring...
the reflections of light from specifically placed pigments

to describe or determine the nature would be a waste of breath...
an explanation would fit more soundly in a sigh
or a sharp intake of breath
when the brain ignites with rhythmic explosions of electric orgasms....
sighful
moan[ahh..]
re-lease[ahh..]

when the feel of an image
can sink into your pores
melt inside
and become one with your everything
your heartbeat in time
with a pulsing star radiating the cosmic wonders
the universe and you collided inside a single moment
coursing, crashing, collide

how long has it been?

since you've felt

without touch...

crash...collide

feel me

and an achingly painful s.l.o.w. step to the next
another piece of art in a long line to gaze upon...
...another moment...before the dust settles on the frame...

How long did you stare?

...into my soul...

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On Friday December 28th, 2007, italianbella (296) writes:

wow this drew me in and captivated me amazing write:)

On Tuesday February 15th, 2005, frozen (748) writes:

This poem is nothing less than exquisite

On Friday January 7th, 2005, BoldSolitude (277) writes:

excellant depiction of an artist by an artist. each piece an artist creates bears an imprint of their soul, you so wonderfully captured with your words.

On Monday December 27th, 2004, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:

This is truly a fine work. I enjoyed the imagery. Some of it was lost on me, but only a very small amount, and certainly not so much that I didn't understand it! Nice shit.

On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

I still don't have an adequate comment for this...but I'm still trying...lol

On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:

~ you are sensational. This is illuminating . . the ending was masterly. Your poems are remarkable, distinguished and utterly captivating with profound insight. Outstanding. ~ Rose ~

On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:

"when the feel of an image can sink into your pores melt inside and become one with your everything your heartbeat in time with a pulsing star radiating the cosmic wonders the universe and you collided inside a single moment coursing, crashing, collide" ~

On Wednesday September 15th, 2004, FallenFaith (47) writes:

art is the ultimate form of expression.

On Wednesday August 4th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (594) writes:

I am not sure I will be able to say anything that would justify this poem. Amazing

On Sunday August 8th, 2004, SurrealityCheck (5) writes:

I second that.

On Tuesday July 27th, 2004, DarkDruidess (203) writes:

Nice journey you took me on...I am still pondering thoughts but I wanted you to know that I throughly enjoyed this....

On Friday July 23rd, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

'an explanation would fit more soundly in a sigh or a sharp intake of breath' S.i.g.h. [ahhh]...beautifully crafted/painted/brushed; liquid ecstacy morphed for the soul(&eyes);this is art peeling, dripping away like the blood of the sun.

On Tuesday July 20th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (689) writes:

I love the lines - "another piece of art in a long line to gaze upon... ...another moment...before the dust settles on the frame...". Very nice! Ciao, T/S

On Monday July 12th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:

This was mesmerizing. The fast pace of it made it all the better and made it feel like I was careening around in the madness. The ending was perfect. ~Ship!

On Friday July 9th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

I won't tell this is my favorite from you, because I know there will be more to come.. but certainly this is close to my favorite . .I cannot describe how this summarizes so many feelings into a whole . ..you own a talent unlike the rest.

On Monday July 5th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

i agree with recycled... this was so extensively drawn... the pull was sensational... great write - Sue

On Sunday July 4th, 2004, Recycled (161) writes:

You make the rest of us look unworthy of being here. "an explanation would fit more soundly in a sigh". That line my friend, is worthy of an award.

On Sunday July 4th, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:

you have such a gift for classic expression .. intricate .. your metaphoric scenarios like this , are compelling , 'cause you weld the world to an artist's wish for the moment's absorbtion into the work ... trusting the moment will become a part of you f

On Sunday July 4th, 2004, capt_funguy (999) writes:

forever .... symbiotic heart pull ... beautiful ... funguy

On Sunday July 4th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:

magical execution; slows and quickens the pace perfectly as required... lovely and engulfing work. :)

On Saturday July 3rd, 2004, NikesRain (1475) writes:

you've conveyed the intensity, passion and emotions so wonderfully in this. It's utterly sublime...

On Monday June 13th, 2005, NikesRain (1475) writes:

i remember first reading this, the sketch artists/painter in me becoming more elated with each line...my mind and heart in a frenzy yelling ....

On Monday June 13th, 2005, NikesRain (1475) writes:

"yes! yes! yes! This is exactly what it's suppose to be like! How you feel making it, how you want your work seen!" and still to this day........it has the exact same effect each time i read it....thank you for that.

On Saturday July 3rd, 2004, anth (1611) writes:

its too obvious how superb this work is,its classic (classic old soul) divine is the word ,awestriking work

On Saturday July 3rd, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_*shakes head*...another clinic,OLd.so perfect...and the last few lines are sheer brilliance.but i expect no less from you.

On Saturday July 3rd, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:

wow...it feels like there is such longing here...beautifully portrayed and intoxicating...

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Oldie, this is divine beyond words.. the intensity so enchanting, so passionate and involved. The proximity of your poetry is of wonderous, beautiful depths..

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

your descriptions are luscious and I gain so much from them.. magnificent, you amaze me. *small-bear hug*

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

Wow, im well umm... lol i cant explain... its deep cool

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, nell (328) writes:

this is beautifull, an artwork in itself,wicked write oldie

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, evolve (2229) writes:

Oh, this is exquisite...so passionate...people say that painters make love to the canvas, as a joke...but I think it's true...if you watch someone paint, and the emotions that dance on their brush...it's amazing.

On Friday July 2nd, 2004, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

ahh, there is a love of art here.....your words seeth with that unexplainable admiration ......well done.....well spoken..............urban

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