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Chaos (Separating Tangled Thoughts)

Dreaming drove me to reach past hope.
I'm awake now
I find myself conforming to fit a mold
I once fought so hard to break.

I'm so far from somehwere,
but knee deep in nowhere.

I have felt the thirst of those that seek the power of heaven

I've lost you in the crowd of my mind.

In the eyes of my god
I'm nothing more then a whore
eager to please
on silken innocent knees

(my mind scares me sometimes.)

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On Tuesday March 18th, 2008, tangeled (579) writes:

this is fuckin great. i love it!! ~tÅ~

On Thursday January 25th, 2007, carlosjackal (1549) writes:

Killer line after killer line. This is such a short write but what you convey screams volumes perfectly. Write the hell on, Lady..

On Tuesday September 26th, 2006, Alanarchy (1627) writes:

"My God's will becomes me. When he speaks, he speaks through me. He has needs, like I do. We both want to rape you." The end reminded me of opiate a bit. You always bring to mind something picturesque and appealing to me. Write the hell on, drea.

On Friday September 22nd, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (712) writes:

"Dreaming drove me to reach past hope. I'm awake now" - great way to set the tone for this piece. I love the flow of it and I can relate as of late. Ciao, T/S

On Friday September 15th, 2006, dying angel (1423) writes:

"(my mind scares me sometimes.)" damn. just...damn. this was...wow!

On Friday September 15th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2402) writes:

holy shit!!!!!!! Holy.Shit. WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah, your mind is a bit scary....WOW!!!!!!!!!!

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