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I see her sitting there across the room,
were both sitting on similar chairs.
I'm in awe of here beauty, stlyle and smile
her long straight black hair,
two inches above her tail bone.
her posture is so purfect like
she has had a million pictures taken.
I see those pouty lips almost always in black.
how her cheeks lift when her true smile shows.
I see those hazel eyes peering at me,
as if to know what i'm thinking.
the many designs and ways to use black eyeliner.
God shes beautiful...
I cant take this any longer,
i have to get a better view of this..wonder.
as I stand she does the same.
her style is enticing to say the least.
every ansemble is well chosen,
for the appropraite time, mood or event.
with a smile on my face and a deep breath
i nervously walk toward her.
though she stands there waiting.
we are face to face now,just inches apart.
we both part our lips to say somthing.
I have huge smile on my face
this mirror is awesome,
it defines me well !!



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On Friday August 6th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:
Diva Satanica, reflection on the wall, your face the fairest of them all.


On Monday September 8th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:
Haha, thats awsome. The mirror and what not. Yeah there was a dead give away, but it was good none the less...


On Thursday August 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (14) writes:
Bizzare and wondeful. paints your body perfectly...


On Thursday August 21st, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:
I like this one! It's sexy


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:
The twist at the end made it all worth while. A fine, piece of writing. Compose to its upmost perfection.-Kefka


On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
haha, yes, confidence is good and rare... good job


On Monday August 11th, 2003, Seraphic (289) writes:
sheer confidence, that's what I got most from this. I could never describe myself in such beautiful poetry, but you've done it wonderfully...very nice


On Sunday August 10th, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:
Ah, I really like this. The ending threw me off, but made the poem that much better. Good job.


On Sunday August 10th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:
I tis good to love yourself..confidence is the mightiest turn on one can possess..Good piece here...~Velvet~


On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:
nice i'vee read one kinda like this xomewhere, great job none the less


On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Marek (140) writes:
"as I stand she does the same" gave it away. Maybe because I have written a similar piece (not posted here). Enjoyable though the mystery was complete for me until that line.



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