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Immerciful Sleep

I hide my tears behind a plastic smile,
I'm only going to live for a short while.

Along with these pills I swallow my pride,
death train comes, I go along for a ride.

I lay down on my blackened bed,
by morning hopefully I'll be dead.

They all thought I was in deep sleep,
now that they've noticed they sadly weep.

Isn't there suppose to be bright lights I walk to?
I only see this dark hole I fall through.

Family and friends all mourne at my wake,
Dear Satan, my soul is yours to take.

Down I go into the ground,
You see even with out me, the world still goes 'round.

One year since it happend, my bodies now rotten,
gladly now I am forgotten.

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On Friday August 6th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

INTENSE!

On Friday August 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (14) writes:

This work left me teary eyed because you told of a world without you and I, for a brief moment, felt the world without you, for me, I am not sure it will spin a little slower without you...

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:

to be hated and remembered, or loved and forgotten? the eternal question

On Monday August 11th, 2003, Seraphic (289) writes:

ah, suicide poems, I've written quite a few in my day...all very sad, but this poem (by style and flow) is really good

On Sunday August 10th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

Although I detest suicide poems..(millions of them everywhere everywhere) sometimes it is sad but true, that when the smoke clears, ppl just tend to forget. Sad though, that this must apply to a life as well..~Vel~

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, An Expired Member (71) writes:

i love your work. I really like how this poem all flows together keep it up

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:

Style and flow, indeed it has..So sad, and such melancholy images it give unto its reader..I can tell i'm gonna like your work...-Kefka

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, whort_diddy (204) writes:

Very good poem~whort_diddy

On Friday August 8th, 2003, Aurora_Light (575) writes:

nice its not the typical poem nice but its not the answer

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

Suicide is a god thing as long as the gun you fire is filled with cum. If the gun is filled with bullets, then you are not sexy. You are a punk. Die.

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

This is very good...This is a different way to write a suicide poem... I like it!

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (32) writes:

wow. very good. ~ap

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Nadir (615) writes:

This poem got style and flow. Terms like Saten make little sense to me. I often catch myself lauging when looking at the word. So that ruined it slightly for me. Anyway the rest i enjoyed.

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Nadir (615) writes:

Ohh i see now that i cant even spell it hehe Sorry.

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