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Corruption

As I whither slowly
Into the darkness
The petals fall
Faster then usual
My mind is corrupted
And my body,
My soul
They are all dark
like dried rose petals
That have been scattered
over a fresh grave.

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On Thursday October 14th, 2004, Chaos-Slayer- (8) writes:

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!

On Saturday August 7th, 2004, An Expired Member (32) writes:

again your darkness is awesome, i love this write!

On Friday August 6th, 2004, MEATGRINDER MAN (510) writes:

COOL!

On Friday October 17th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1763) writes:

not bad, not bad at all.. sad to see your not a member no more..

On Monday September 8th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:

Hmm..intersting work. I like it...

On Friday August 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (14) writes:

I can not say anything because your work as taken my breath away...

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:

are your mind body and soul dead, then? dead like bloated flesh, floating in the sea?

On Sunday August 10th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

What hue are the petals?...the hue of a rose tends to tell so much...

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Marek (140) writes:

Why is it that good short pieces seem to say so much more than you would expect? Lovely dark imagery here, a picture is worth a thousand words, but these thirty eight are worth a thousand pictures.

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:

Short, but definitly sweet...The feeling of total dispair, death death capsizes all other emotions here..Very nice.-Kefka

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, whort_diddy (204) writes:

Nice poem, I liked it~whort_diddy

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

Very Nice Poem

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (32) writes:

beautiful poem. Great description and emotion. ~ap

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Aurora_Light (576) writes:

rose petals dried or fresh are beautiful just like this write u have made.

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

Intriguing critique of the bondage of lust and abomination.

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