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Unholy Water

I served my lord with all my life
In my core, all my might
A dedicated heart for you
A lamb for burn, a gift to you

Day and night, sacrificed
Flesh, bone and living light
Now my demons comfort me
No longer Will I Question you
No longer Will I pray to you

Always falling on my knees
Remaining silent to my pleads
Never speaking physically
A child forgotten spiritually

New water feels this empty cup
A broken marriage lost its touch
Burning flames of hate for you
Ignite my heart to and through

Never feeling guilty of
Being worthy of your love
To call upon your empty name
Is paper flowers, castaline dames

On a path of my own
A Fallen Angel in alone
To understand eternity
Draw the strings of destiny

You engender things of good
But I cannot thank you like I should
Your works they are deceitfulness
Alleviating your guiltlessness

I need Amelioration
Its Suffocation
Desecration
An Aquarian Damnation

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On Thursday May 6th, 2004, Death (30) writes:

I loved this poem. You three, you know who i mean, are truely awesome.

On Saturday November 29th, 2003, SGT Bloth (199) writes:

I have been there...don't worry you.ll be back....BLOTH

On Sunday November 30th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

maybe...maybe not...and if i do that would make me a coward in my case+Fallen One+

On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, _Andrew_ (302) writes:

awesome... you're a very very good writer, nice job here, i sit here baffled *~*aNDReW*~*

On Thursday August 14th, 2003, Diva_Satanica (110) writes:

you are blasphemous indeed. you write as if you are judgements little sibling ready to take on his dark ways.-D.S

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

wonderful... i enjoyed a lot, we have a lot in common... i mean poem wise that is... compare if you'd like-UI

On Monday August 11th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:

I love the title, I love the flow. I don't like the message, but I do love this poem. Brilliant work.

On Monday August 11th, 2003, Deliverence (813) writes:

Now, this is poetry I like..Unholy water..very good piece.-Kefka

On Sunday August 10th, 2003, Six-Out (1832) writes:

I agree with Vel. This was a wonderful piece. I'm sure many of us have felt this way about one thing or another.

On Sunday August 10th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (532) writes:

faith lost....could be religion, love..oh so many aveneues left open here..I love the visions that dance in my twisted mind...Thanks for sharing this ~Velvet~

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