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poeticly suicidal

tears of an unknown cause on my cheek
suicidal with out intentions
i just feel so alone

all i have is my poetry
so tonight my suicide is in verse
no note to tell why you
for i do not know myself

as i close my eyes and dream
i see the blade slide down my arm
and the blood dripping slowly

drinking from my arm
i swallow a few random pills
the slices turn to gashes
blood pures freely

a few more pills injested to ensure death
my blood has an exqusit taste

taste... my last sense

as i fade away from myself
i kiss my once crimson lips
farewell my friend

now i close my book
lay down my pen
until another suicidal feeling comes
when i can write one more verse of death

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On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

I like that you say that you write about it only. That you get out your thoughts by writing. It makes the picture very clear.

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Suicidal Tendencies (27) writes:

I think it was great.

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

i like it, you like others expressing how you feel, but...why you, should be you why in the sixth line?

On Monday January 19th, 2004, eternal despair (72) writes:

thanx for telling me that looks stupid ehhehee

On Monday January 19th, 2004, eternal despair (72) writes:

thanc for the truth bud, ive been having soe trouble with writing lately but i feel a good one coming to me.

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

this sounds like a familiar write.. maybe it's becourse we see lots of these on dp.. but it wassent a bad write, just you know.. - not new ? - :o)

On Monday January 19th, 2004, eternal despair (72) writes:

yea its new...

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

I know that it's anew write.. but this reminds me of I have a writers block write.. :o)

On Monday January 19th, 2004, eternal despair (72) writes:

hmmmm kinda, but also i felt like shit lately just trying to get it out.

On Monday January 19th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1843) writes:

dont get me wrong.. I dident meen to say that i't suck.. I'm just being honest saying that i'm not realy impressed.. but hey, poetry is for the writer not the reader.. :o)

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