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poetic sanctuary

dead inside
i lust for the reaper
my soul cries out to death

alone tonight
i dream of a freedom
my heart yearns to let go

insanely inlove
i'm hanging on for him
my love is eternally his

suicidal thoughts
i cant stop them
my blood urges to be spilt

heart broken
i hate this pain
my dark mind manifests a poet

poetic sanctuary
i rest my thoughts in verse
my love for him keeps me alive

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On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, Nadir (630) writes:

So simple it would seem, Yet no simple is the doubt, Love stain doubt, Doubt stain love. So simple it would seem. Tiger

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, Lady_Lilith (113) writes:

Aww this is great. So sad, yet so beautiful... Very nice job... *Lilith*

On Thursday September 4th, 2003, Lady_Lilith (113) writes:

Oh and the title is just perfect :) *Lilith*

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, Marek (145) writes:

I really like the beat of the second line in the 1st and 2nd stanzas, would have liked to see that beat and loose rhyme through the poem. :)

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

well done, this feeling of despair lays upon my heart.......well said........urban

On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Awesome, great write..i feel the darkness of it all. Very good..keep this up.-Kefka

On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1821) writes:

this is a good love poem, original. I like it.. Monkey

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