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"The Cure" by BlackRobedMage

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How long must I wait for my finale demise
Forever cold with sorrow filled eyes
Run into darkness my only reprieve
Torment in light is all I recieve
Bled of all life, alone and cold
A heart no longer beating, spirit sold
Drained of all will to live or to die
No longer searching for reasons why
Numb to the core, time stands still
In my mind it always will
Veins unwhole, blood on the floor
Heaven's angels beat on the door
Light floods through an empty room
Shadows echo my very doom
Screams of denile fill the air,
But those around don't seem to care
Gentle beems taunt and tease
Curing me of my disease






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On Friday January 9th, 2004, Methos (154) writes:
A great write..laced with darkness and appeal...Well done//-Methos


On Thursday December 18th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
This is good! I hope you post more soon, I'm looking forward to reading more, just let me know when you do.


On Thursday December 18th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:
Hmm...not bad. Not bad at all. It had a really nice flow. And remember, we are our own worst critics. You may think that this isn't a worthwhile read, but I see 4 of us now that disagree.


On Wednesday December 17th, 2003, Jadednoir (38) writes:
"Shadows echo my very doom..." very great line here... me likey:p ~Jaded


On Wednesday December 17th, 2003, BlackRobedMage (18) writes:
It's true though. I know there a lot of young writers around here who are amazing and I can only give you my best effort. My work is nothing special... just thoughts like everyone else.


On Wednesday December 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:
well, after reading"'m only 15, what do you expect? " and then this poem, you derserve more credit than you give yourself!


On Wednesday December 17th, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (70) writes:
very nice piece, keep it up ,thanks for sharing



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