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Already Fallen

Falling into shadows
All around my room
Vile claws raking
Across my pale skin

Hellish fiends descending
Upon my limp form
To devour my soul
Break apart my mind

Eyes of pity
Look upon the darkness
No longer with hatred
But now with sorrow

Malefeasant grins
Eyes of hate
Injurious thoughts
Cruel beatings to occur

Screams of anguish
From one no longer light
Fallen into darkness
Not wanting to return

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On Thursday September 11th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

This piece is to my liking...it's haunting+Fallen One+

On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, Nadir (615) writes:

It got style and flow. If you want to write something els, I think you will have to return. Anyway just a thought. And this is good shit. I just see potential for something else.

On Tuesday August 12th, 2003, BlackRobedMage (18) writes:

Well half of what I write doesn't get posted. Thanx and I'll try to post somemore.

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, An Expired Member (71) writes:

i really like this one. . it is well written

On Saturday August 9th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

I agree

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