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I thought we were cool,
I thought we were tight,
I thought I could trust you,
then again, I'm never right,
just when i accomplished,
getting her out of my sight,
you drag that tramp back in,
and make me fight another fight,
I've tried as hard as I can,
but i just can't forgive,
she's hurt me far too much,
made me lose my will to live,
There's still this scar on my heart,
from the rip which she did tear,
I told you everything I felt towards her,
but you didn't really care.

Now you're my betrayer,
My Brutus I'd never suspect,
you sold me out for a whore,
and now you've lost all my respect,
To make your matters worse,
you had to fuck with my friend,
an unforgiveable crime,
granting my wrath to no end,
I want to drown the pain you've caused,
in your blood I'd quench my flame,
that smolders deep inside my chest,
and runs so darkly through my veins,
Some would say I'm violent,
Sometimes I want to blood to fill my cup,
and now that you've shown me your true face,
I want to fuck it up.



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On Wednesday November 23rd, 2005, An Expired Member (11) writes:
wow this is deep....i really like this write good job


On Saturday January 15th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:
this shows so very much emotion...and its painfully sad.. nice write


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, Jenni (61) writes:
I really like this piece, it shows so much emotion, and i really like the way you end it, great write. ~Jenni


On Saturday January 1st, 2005, Astra Dei (639) writes:
This is one of your best pieces Ben. Its very raw. filled with an anger few can understand. your on my fav list babe. i hope you find something better with your new girlfriend


On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, sIo (872) writes:
i know how you feel right now and i wish to god that i could take it away but i can't, just know i am here for you always. i love you!


On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, mysticventures (537) writes:
ditto Darkwolf - but on another note - this was a very well put together piece - and your heart and your emotions were very clearly represented here!


On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, xSightxSetxHighx (14) writes:
i sorta know what you are feeling since my friends are complete assholes. Umm, i really like this poem. It really seems to get your point across very well.


On Tuesday November 2nd, 2004, DarkWolf (442) writes:
"my friends are complete assholes" - Then why do you call them friends? -Michael



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