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"Irony" by Spikes_of_Blue

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My eyes, they opened,
on this beautiful starry night,
my vision, amazed,
fixed on every prick of light,
my body, feeling numb,
from the blood spilled on the ground,
the heat, from the flames,
of the fire circled 'round,
the sound of the crickets chirp,
and the buzz of the waiting fly,
funny how nice the world seems,
now that i close my eyes to die.



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On Saturday January 1st, 2005, SamoneDrone (400) writes:
i love the flow and the irony, lol. you did a great job with this one...............-samone


On Saturday January 1st, 2005, Astra Dei (632) writes:
beautiful. well written. you are quite elquent Ben.


On Sunday April 25th, 2004, Midnight Orchid (158) writes:
Perfect title for this wonderfully perfect poem. It felt so beautiful imagining this and trying to truly feel it. Wonderful job. =-MO-=


On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, Lydia Jade (783) writes:
Very beautifull....by the way i absolutly loooove your DP name!!....::LoKi::


On Thursday April 22nd, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue (50) writes:
how interesting...i've always liked the name loki...trickster god in norse mythology...


On Friday April 23rd, 2004, Lydia Jade (783) writes:
Howstrange is i that it is my real name...with me being a irl and all i find it really strange....lol...::LoKi::


On Saturday January 1st, 2005, SamoneDrone (400) writes:
yum like asian loki (spelling?) squash?


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:
I love the concept of this, admiring the beauty of the world when it's too late. Lives up to the title perfectly. Great write I really enjoyed this. ~L


On Tuesday April 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:
i agree with lynaes... nice write. ~nikki



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