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Feel so hurt,
dont know what to say,
I knew something bad,
would happen yesterday,
you could have stayed home,
and talked to me,
you said that you cared,
but not from what I see,
you don't mean what you say,
you mean what you do,
and i feel so betrayed,
cause i thought you loved me too.

Maybe you had too much to drink,
although you didn't mean to hurt me,
it still makes my heart sink.

I didnt expect you to be the same,
as the rest of the girls,
I guess I expected you to be more tame,
and not get on the closest guy,
but I thought of you as an angel,
sent from heaven in the sky,
I thought you'd said,
you'd never hurt me,
but I guess I heard,
a false testimony



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On Thursday October 20th, 2005, Frater Synth (34) writes:
i loved it vary good write i would change the ending a little 2 make it flow better like fo example instead of "but I guess I heard,a false testimony" i would change it 2 "but i guess thats a lie" it would sound much better i think ne way good job


On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:
crash and burn,live andlearn,. unfortunatly this is something all of us must learn.. to grow...physically and spirtually...I felt the emotion on this one...nice write..


On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
This is another well done poem! I love ur works!


On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (16) writes:
*sigh* pure beauty.. hits close close again yours truely ~ BBS



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