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"Why?" by Spikes_of_Blue

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I want to cry,
but I dont know how,
I want to die,
you've hurt me now,
do you not,
feel remorse?
you just dont want to be caught.

Why did you do this to me?
was i just not enough?
or do i not hold the key,
to your heart so rough?
you dont even care,
that what you've done,
has filled me with despair.



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On Saturday January 1st, 2005, Astra Dei (632) writes:
the most simple and complex of all emotion. love and pain. anger and fear


On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
Wow! I like this one too! I know exactally how this all feels, and it does suck.


On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (32) writes:
lol...i didnt mean your poem sucks. Your poem is amazing. I meant that it sucks that you seem so sad.


On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (32) writes:
its sucks, you seem so sad. But, great poetry comes from sadness. Love and fear are the two most powerful emotions humans can express. What emotion are your poems written from? ~ap


On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, Spikes_of_Blue (50) writes:
fear of not being loved


On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (32) writes:
probably the saddest thing i have heard today. know who you are and never loose that. The only person who ever needs to love you is yourself. ~ap


On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (32) writes:
and i told u fear and love are the most powerful human emotions.


On Tuesday August 5th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:
"I want to cry, but I dont know how, I want to die, you've hurt me now, " -i love it...keep up this good work...awesome...



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