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I have to suffer every day,
hearing the words that you dont say,
is it all so hard to do?
all I want is to be with you.

I feel as if I'm dying,
and inside I'm crying,
you cant really care for me too?
all i want is to close to you.

What is it I have to be?
is there someone else but me?
I know there is someone else but who?
all I want is to be loved by you.

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On Tuesday April 11th, 2006, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

love sucks, i like this poem.. i can relate.. -scars

On Sunday April 25th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Short, but to the point..very well written. -fairy-

On Monday September 1st, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

I like this it is short and sweet, but has SO many emotions in it...Very moving.

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Forever Cold (48) writes:

Very nicely said, it is short and simple but with meaning behind it.. i very much loved it.

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, aNaRcHyPoEt (32) writes:

i can really relate to this poem. I know how it feels to like someone but feel as though they dont like you in return. i keep asking myself what is wrong with me, but after reading your poem i feel...well...more content with myself.~ap

On Tuesday August 5th, 2003, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

im going through somthing containing these elements........your poem has helped me.......well done......urban

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