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The echo of her presence keeps me company
like a tangible shadow might lean against the wall
and refuse to be restricted to a two-dimensional world.
I can feel the horizon move beneath my feet between
black and purple as the hands of the wind pull stained
clouds over its face, hinting it is quite tired of looking
at me pace through its realm while I daydream.


“Okay, I’m leaving…but you said ‘make yourself
at home’, how was I to know you didn’t really mean it?”

“No one really means it, trust me.”


Halfway down the spiral staircase is a wooden
heart propped against a stone fence, a couple of
cracks in the surface serving as peep holes.
I’m not sure if the eyes peering through belong
to your lingering absence or my relentless
introspection, but either way I feel your perfume
brushing the specks of slight resolve from my face.


“You knew it wasn’t really me…no matter how much
you tried to squint and justify it, you should have kept walking.”

“Yeah, true, but is it really cheating to sleep with your shadow?”


-- Steve McKennon, 10/25/05




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On Thursday April 13th, 2006, Baron Von Dark (150) writes:
Wonderful. I am finding new life here.


On Monday January 30th, 2006, MindRape (872) writes:
damn...this ...this is tempting. I am salivating Steve, truely i wish you would post more to read from this inspiration


On Sunday December 25th, 2005, NikesRain (1422) writes:
this slipped easy and familiar into the heart, like a fine needle smooth and quiet ....made my heart ache and sigh with contemplation and reflection ... great write


On Sunday December 11th, 2005, Mistress Shadow (364) writes:
I wonder if loving a shadow is better than loving a dream. Excellent work. ~T


On Friday November 18th, 2005, diavolessa (275) writes:
a love to make us blind, blind enough to love a shadow...it's poetry as such that brings me back to this place, and I thank you dearly for it.


On Monday November 14th, 2005, antiScripsony (39) writes:
When the smaller bits are quality-dense, they're just as good as the whole.


On Monday November 7th, 2005, manywalks (950) writes:
This breathes across the soul, warm and silent. ~ mw


On Wednesday November 2nd, 2005, GothicBlack (268) writes:
WOW! OMG! its YOU! lol. i haven't seen work from you, TS, in SOOOO long, i was starting to wonder if you were still alive. It's nice to see old familar faces in this see of poetry. And what poetry you write. To sleep with your shadow, beautiful. ~gothic~


On Thursday November 3rd, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (751) writes:
Hey! So nice to see your comment, I'm glad to see your familiar face too!


On Wednesday November 2nd, 2005, Err0r (570) writes:
Wow. This was amazing. I think personally It's just masturbation if you're with your shadow. Nice.


On Tuesday November 1st, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1064) writes:
""Yeah, true, but is it really cheating to sleep with your shadow?"" DAMN! This is so beyond wonderful that I can only think of one thing to say, and I've already yelled it. DAMN! Beautifully breaking piece. *Evangel*



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