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Nails on a chalkboard that grate on two levels as
what was initially a poor choice in colour has been
neglected to chip and grow away from exposed cuticles.
Those fingers are so often pointed in the direction of
others like a pistol that the owner has failed to notice these
flaws, thinking herself blameless in the glare of the muzzle flash.

I’ve become a human incubator of a dark plague
that threatens to spill forth and choke out life around me –
at least she thinks so, cause it makes me pivotal and her a martyr.
Put the mask of anesthesia over my face so I can suffocate
with whatever green tastes like and what’s me inside can be sold
for spare parts, she’d probably even pay you to take them away.

Someone once loved her…


-- Steve McKennon, April 2005





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On Sunday December 23rd, 2007, italianbella (281) writes:
Youre words compliment one another I really enjoyed reading this great write:)


On Saturday February 17th, 2007, CharlottesWeb (599) writes:
Every once while, when I see painted fingernails this poem will come back to me. The act of which this poem is constructed around irritates me...now it will do more. Your detail sticks with a person.


On Thursday April 13th, 2006, Baron Von Dark (150) writes:
You make me dig deep into my own loves and fears. Amazing


On Saturday February 4th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (275) writes:
ahh..that very first line made me shudder..it really set the mood. good work. ~lauren~


On Tuesday October 25th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1136) writes:
"I’ve become a human incubator of a dark plague"- amazing. this gave me chills.


On Monday October 24th, 2005, ApathysKiss (463) writes:
this was an interesting piece...a wincing vivid beginning to something so solemn and tragic 'Someone once loved her…' in the end. very articulate choices of contrast 'I’ve become a human incubator of a dark plague


On Monday October 24th, 2005, ApathysKiss (463) writes:
that threatens to spill forth and choke out life around me – at least she thinks so, cause it makes me pivotal and her a martyr.' obtuse and a lingering reflective...this probes deeper to the blood pulsing feelings of sorrow.~m~



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