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An Indian Summer night surrounds me
as I walk down the narrow deck on Lake Anne.
It's very quiet tonight with the exception
of some crickets that think it's Spring
and the sound of my feet on the boards.
I grab a bench where I can stare
at the water and drink my over-priced
tea - not because it makes me
a better person, but because I like it.
The tea shop is run by a South American
of high breeding that can explain
the pedigree of every blend.
A tilt of the cup and warm flavours
dance across my tongue and waltz down
my throat as I look out over the ripples.

The lights of the condos that hang over the
banks cast orange and yellow strips in stray
patterns on the surface, which cause it to
sparkle and pulse like a living thing.
Here, all the senses can be massaged
by something that transcends and envelopes
the realms of sight, sound, taste, touch and smell.
This has become my favourite source of solace,
here on a hand crafted bench that overlooks a
man-made lake in a planned community
built over cow pastures and marsh.

An image floats free of Henry Thoreau seeking
aestheticism in a post-modern existentialist
age, where it is a lake, not a flooded field
of dung, merely because we believe that it is.
As I stretch my legs and inhale deeply,
I ponder all the hours of my life that
were sold for such simple pleasures as these,
which are essentially free and almost paid off.

-- Steve McKennon, 11/2001






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On Wednesday December 26th, 2007, italianbella (275) writes:
you have some amazing talent this was a great read:)


On Sunday May 16th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:
what a mind massage to read this!! and find warmth in the reminded realisation of seeing beauty and heightening the senses in such free moments, free like reading your works(which id happily pay for)


On Sunday May 16th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:
and bask in the calm thoughts of what you see in the world around you and in a strange way...take us there


On Sunday March 21st, 2004, Cwn Annwn (106) writes:
Its like a slap across the face...an awakening of the senses...Anyways...Wonderful write!


On Tuesday April 1st, 2003, An Expired Member (94) writes:
man you rock!


On Wednesday March 26th, 2003, manywalks (947) writes:
Beautiful as usual.


On Sunday March 9th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:
This was wonderful. Awesome description and beautiful imagery. Loved it. C-ya.


On Monday March 24th, 2003, darkness_descends (15) writes:
You have beautifully philosophical mind. It is so refreshing in a time when idle minds are running rampant. Great write and much respect! ~Darkness~


On Tuesday March 4th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
cold nights i walk to find sights that sooth the mind... i believe i've been here before


On Thursday February 20th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
This poem was painted in my mind with sheer strokes of genious.


On Thursday February 13th, 2003, apophenia (41) writes:
hello, my lovely philosopher .... seems there are few left with appreciations such as yours ... glad to see a fellow wanderer in the finest sense of the word



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