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I watched you hold a rose yesterday and saw it grow
ugly and wither, shamed by its failure to compare.

The floor of my heart is covered with the leaves
that have fallen in their prime for no other reason
than the chance to brush against your face as you
walk through the realm you now inhabit freely.
Out of desert sands, Eden has been reborn full
of life and colour, all yours to name and use as you
please - most beloved of creation under heaven.

Even the threads of the sun, which one would be
foolish to say could be dimmed by anything else,
never look so lovely as when they fall on you and, like
through a crystal, are weaved into a tapestry of rainbow.
Bands of light twirl and spin, bringing into awareness
corners of reality the normal spectrum can not illuminate,
whispering of possibilities that escaped my imagination.

No matter our paths, or how the years shape us,
your realm is secure, where roses don't dare to grow.

-- 5/13/03





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On Thursday August 23rd, 2007, melinoe (67) writes:
This is simply gorgeous.


On Thursday June 28th, 2007, Rebell tiGer King (679) writes:
genius a thousand times -symph-


On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, diavolessa (275) writes:
this is one of my favorite works from this site, it's something about it that speak to me even after the first time i read it almost four years ago. how strange that dp can still hold a place in my heart after such long while.


On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, merih (14) writes:
I find I keep coming back to this and a new imagery is created everytime


On Friday February 24th, 2006, An Expired Member (9) writes:
I like this one.


On Thursday November 3rd, 2005, Err0r (579) writes:
Mind if I jump on the bandwagon? I usually don't comment on things with a ton of comments and dp mail instead, but I couldn't wait. This was brilliant. I savored every word from this like my favorite hard candy...:)


On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, Sin (1641) writes:
there are no words to do this justice..to say it is beautiful is an understatement...lovely isnt nearly strong enough...exquisite still doesnt even begin to touch the emotions that this piece evokes...i love it and there is nothing more i can say ~kristy


On Friday February 11th, 2005, island warrior (303) writes:
Stunning piece


On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:
beautiful, just beautiful =)


On Friday May 7th, 2004, boundandfallen (32) writes:
you make me want to just hold you.


On Thursday April 8th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:
People would kill to have your gift of written expression. But I would kill for the opportunity to have the emotion behind these words. Time, so they say. :::OLd


On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Yukionna (7) writes:
damn - don't really know what to say -Yuki


On Monday February 9th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:
What can I say that won't be rendered rednundant by the myriad of comments you have already received? I loved this too, especially lines like "than the chance to brush against your face". Exquisite. FF


On Sunday November 9th, 2003, An Expired Member (61) writes:
beautiful. truely beautiful.


On Sunday September 14th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
It must be lonely


On Monday September 8th, 2003, Nightwing (12) writes:
You get a standing ovation on this one! It's an absolutely beautiful piece!


On Monday September 1st, 2003, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:
Suberb!!! This poem is a representation of absolute beauty!


On Wednesday July 16th, 2003, Sky Singer (212) writes:
when i saw the title i expected something different... amazing work (but you already knew that:) )


On Tuesday July 1st, 2003, Silent_Poet (72) writes:
Pity I was unable to read this when you first posted it, I believe it would have made my month! Even so, it has made my evening reading something like this before I go to bed. Well written, so very well put. -SP


On Sunday June 15th, 2003, An Expired Member (28) writes:
This was such a beautiful poem it wove such a pretty picture and shows your feelings for whomever this lucky gurl is quite well.


On Monday June 9th, 2003, Bast (899) writes:
very very well done...


On Wednesday May 28th, 2003, hate_doll (328) writes:
This is so beautiful, shaped with love and beauty only you could posess...amazing write...it has left me speechless...(!)


On Tuesday May 27th, 2003, Aurora_Light (573) writes:
wow is all i can manage at this time


On Sunday May 25th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
"...where roses don’t dare to grow." this is a truely ugly/beautiful prose/poem. U have a gift w/ words; your descriptions create images like paintings. I like these Ugly Roses u paint.


On Friday May 23rd, 2003, Vampira (98) writes:
Beautiful words from an even more beautiful soul......WOW I guess you really do like that girl huh???**wonders if you will still find time to worship me, now that you worship another**


On Saturday May 24th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:
Of course! Where else would I find a someone that drives men to suicide (Red Wine and Dead Roses) and loves kitties? : )


On Thursday May 15th, 2003, Jonas (867) writes:
*sigh* ... and i feel as if a great weight has been lifted, and though this lack of gravity scares me, the lack of cavity invigorates a mind that wants to hope for love's victory, by a two touchdown spread.


On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:
This is one of the most awesome pieces i've ever read. Supremely beautiful in every respect. To prove my words are not hollow, i'm putting this straight into my favourites. Very, very, very well done my friend.


On Monday May 12th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
I found this to be calm and refreshing. The texture is smooth and cool and the over all atmosphere amazing. Nice work. ~Whisper~


On Monday May 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:
Beautiful. Your poetry amazes me, I love your philosphical mind. I enjoyed this immensely. C-ya. ~ Asheai


On Monday May 12th, 2003, DoctorAsh (507) writes:
Nice write . Pluck a guppie from its fishtank because of its pretty little colors, and put it into a cup filled with urine. Thats alittle better ..


On Monday May 12th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:
Damn your good. Excellent usage of words.-Kefka


On Monday May 12th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
Don't you just love to bring down common beliefs? I find this poem to be of magnificent power. The descriptive bubble in it just suffocates you with its beauty. I should also say that you used roses as a totally new and perfect symbol. I would like to pic


On Monday May 12th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
k a favorite line but I can’t I am still wrapped in the awe of this poem. Fabulous… Much <3 darkside!


On Monday May 12th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
Explain me something, why is it the 13th of May?!?!? Just saw it and I am kind of lost?!?!?!


On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:
Hey, thanks for all of the kind words! I am back in Afghanistan and we are 9 hours ahead of you, so it was the 13th here when I finished it.


On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:
It kinda hit me that you were somewhere in Europe or Asia, but I saw Reston VA, so I was ?!?! yeah, maybe we could try to win the lotery... ^_^


On Tuesday May 13th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:
Basically, I can see your tomorrow from here...but, trust me, it doesn't look any different. Although maybe we could try to win the lottery sometime... : )


On Monday May 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (83) writes:
I always thought roses were supposed to be the supreme beauty.... oh well.... Nice Write



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