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I’m pretty sure I am in a coma.

Pathways rolling off toward distant points of promise converge
back on me like the knot holding together a Christmas bow
that’s wrapped around a big box with my name on it.
I keep trying to snap awake, squinting to see the hospital ceiling
that must be just past this quite convincing illusion cocooning me.

This can’t be real.

Fate seems to have walked before me handing out VIP passes,
because the doors keep opening and I am getting more worried
someone will discover they have the wrong guy and take it all back.
A large weed appeared in the bricks of my porch and I checked for
days if it would grow to the clouds so I could climb out of here.

Look for the Adam’s apple.

If this year were a woman, it would be Tyra Banks with angel wings, but a little voice in my mind keeps telling me she’s bound to
end up being one of those transvestite celebrity impersonators.
Every once in a while I spin around at an odd time to catch that
bastard running up behind me to say “You’ve been punked!”

I’m pretty sure I am in a coma.

-- by Steve McKennon, 3/11/08




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On Wednesday April 23rd, 2008, worm (131) writes:
ts... I see a lot of growth in your writing since we've last talked... great thoughts, great form and it does get you thinking a little bit... and, after all, isn't that why we put pen to paper? it's good to read your thoughts again, old friend...


On Thursday March 13th, 2008, slow.burn.star (99) writes:
-chuckle-


On Tuesday March 11th, 2008, NikesRain (1422) writes:
you make me reflect a lot with your work... thanks for the positive reminder in yet another great piece from you... *hugs*


On Tuesday March 11th, 2008, Alanarchy (1689) writes:
Hold on to this one. Fucking excellent read. Hahaha, I wish the problem described here was something I was troubled by. Lucky bastard. Hold on to it, fo sho. And write on.


On Tuesday March 11th, 2008, Kui (728) writes:
*Agrees with HDB*


On Tuesday March 11th, 2008, Tinuviel (67) writes:
"Fate seems to have walked before me handing out VIP passes" Love that line.


On Tuesday March 11th, 2008, heartdripsblack (772) writes:
this was simply amazing. ~ hdb.



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