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Standing there,
Like some burnt out soul.
Full of candle lit despair,
Gazing out to a sea of sky.
Painting your rainbow kissed nightmares,
Across a hazy curtain of stars,
In the hope some poor
Apple sauce eyed
Cloud child
Will notice your pleas for help.

Smiling at the chances you missed,
Somewhere between the clouds of epiphany,
That circle your fallen angel head
(And my benevolent existence).
Just noticeable enough
For the mirror sharded rain
To pass you by.
As you stare into the life
That you made for yourself.

Now you're just another burnout
Another one of life's stars
Hung out to die
In nothing more than celestial darkness.
You went too fast -
Burnt too bright.
The ace you once played with
Has swallowed what little soul you've left
And there's nothing in your eyes
But celestial darkness.





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On Thursday October 30th, 2003, SamoneDrone (400) writes:
the descriptions in this mezmorize me. honostly i can say i love this piece. it is amazing.


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:
This is one of my favorites it's shaking.The last line finished with grace.


On Thursday August 7th, 2003, An Expired Member (23) writes:
"Painting your rainbow kissed nightmares"~ wow that was just "WOW" i love that line!!! it hit me hard. keep posting so i can read more!


On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, Spikes_of_Blue (50) writes:
outstanding...im speechless...this is so great and so true...definetly hits me...keep it up


On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (18) writes:
This is so, beautiful. Beautiful isn't even a strong even word for this piece. Just fantastic, rich with grace. a_o_h


On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, boughtwithblood (293) writes:
of what you've posted, this is far and away the best. the first four lines grabbed my attention and held it So tightly. i read and reread. brava



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