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Envy

I can feel your shiver on me
The temperature rises around me
The blood pumps harder within me
The stars look on in envy

I can see the moon falling in your eyes
And through your soul, dawn arrives
My thoughts grown lighter within me
The sun looks on in envy

The sweetest touch holds a lasting kiss
The world disappears in just one wish
My breath grows shorter within me
The moon looks on in envy

My fingertips crave your siren’s song
To think it’s been there all along
My head grows lighter within me
The heavens look on in envy

Two seconds is too much a waste
I can feel your passion’s taste
The world grows dimmer within me
And the world looks on in envy

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On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:

mmm...lovely. this piece...burns gently, softly, but demanding in its quiet glow. beautiful. :)

On Monday November 15th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:

great idea,stunning flow and rhyme,really enjoyed it

On Monday November 15th, 2004, frozen (741) writes:

i really this but then i like all ure poetry u write beautifully

On Monday November 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (4) writes:

I really like this poem. The flow wsa great, and the elements go on..very well wirtten.

On Monday November 15th, 2004, indefined (679) writes:

hell yeah, i had to slow myself down for this, which i always take as an excellent indication of a flow done right. nice work.

On Monday November 15th, 2004, xSightxSetxHighx (14) writes:

This was good..i am a fan of the rhyming scheme although i don't do it often. And the envyness with the elements was great.

On Monday November 15th, 2004, Solace (1401) writes:

nice rythm and rhyme, flows well and the theme is well expressed...I comment with as much feeling as a clinical diagnosis and regret it... *smiles.*

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