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In Your Eyes

Temptation arises
As I look into your eyes
I’m paralyzed

This moment is fleeting
And I hope it’s not deceiving
My desire
Drawn to your fire
Higher, higher

Earthquakes could shake
the ground under my feet
But all that’s just noise compared
to when our eyes meet

(I’m paralyzed
Lost in your eyes)

Gravity won’t hold
My feet to this ground
I’m flying faster and
I’m going straight down

(My demise
Is in your eyes)

Drowning I turn from your face
You smile’s got a beautiful taste
Oh god,
Sweet rapture, divine
The clock ticks out time

(Lost in your sights
I’m paralyzed)

My desire
Drawn to your fire
Higher
Higher

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On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

that is timeless... and beautiful... 1LOVE

On Wednesday March 3rd, 2004, Methos (154) writes:

Fawn, it's been a long time...i've been here and there ya know..i truly love this and agree with Urban different style, but very good. Always amazed by you -Methos

On Sunday February 29th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (968) writes:

Oooh him say he like it, boss. This has a different style of flow than I'm used to seeing from you and it works wonderfully. I agree with purr, fifth stanza owns. Awsome job Fawn:) ~Ryan

On Sunday February 29th, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:

This is developed so well...made my heart beat faster as I read it. FF

On Saturday February 28th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

thats so beautiful...

On Saturday February 28th, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:

:) This made my heart smile. :::OLd

On Saturday February 28th, 2004, Jadedwings (356) writes:

Great tribute to an even better feeling....That rush of blood to the head feeling we get when eyes meet in silence and that tingle shots right down....well you get the point...well done DB...jaded

On Saturday February 28th, 2004, purr_verse (1423) writes:

Love the fifth stanza - the flying/down image is fabulous. :) A real sense of urgency and pace pervades this piece... very effective indeed. purr

On Saturday February 28th, 2004, Solace (1401) writes:

it um...reminded me of climax :) the second and last stanza's i found furtive and breathless moaning...lol ;)

On Saturday February 28th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:

Aww, a beautiful write. Totally been there, I can relate. Reading this brings a lovely feeling of nostalgia. Very nice work. ~L

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