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Inside of You (Inside of Me)

Tidal waves flow freely
Just as solemn as you could be
When you look at me
Break for a smile as
We drift through denial and

When it goes
The melody flows
I feel alive
Beside you
Inside of me
Inside of you

Nervous expression
You leave your impression
My pseudo confession of
Your glory moment
Feels good don't it and

When it goes
The melody flows
I feel alive
Beside you
Inside of me
Inside of you

Indecent exposure
Compulsory closure and
As the moment flows your
Asking to stay
Through my dismay but

When it goes
The melody flows
I feel alive
Beside you
Inside of me
Inside of you

Taking away
(Take me away)
Taking away
(Take me away)

My innocent smile
Feels fresh for awhile
Sunk down in denial
Lost inside me
Apparent destiny and

When it goes
The melody flows
I feel alive
Beside you
Inside of me
Inside of you

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On Tuesday May 10th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (755) writes:

Great write. The flow is great. Love the way you wrapped this up. ~*~TarT~*~

On Tuesday December 14th, 2004, Liz (401) writes:

I agree. The flow is wonderful and music rises up to support your words. Excellent write.

On Wednesday November 24th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

this flowed magically...i felt the urge to start humming along to the rhythm of this...very sweetly written.

On Thursday July 1st, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:

'Sunk down in denial Lost inside me Apparent destiny and...'/ Like a car crash& an avalanche this poem is powerfully seductive; wonderfully done...

On Tuesday January 6th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:

relaxing as taking a deep breath and realizing you're alive and you're needed, just deeply needed inside and out, wow where did that come from

On Wednesday December 17th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (968) writes:

Sexy write. As always I love your lyrics and these didn't disappoint. Awsome. ~Ryan

On Tuesday December 16th, 2003, SilentStalker (1316) writes:

...there you go again, shaming us all with your excellent writes...this was very entrapping; I like much... -Darun

On Tuesday December 16th, 2003, Methos (154) writes:

Truly a masterpiece!!!!! As season said, i was mystified by this poem. I can think of nothing to say, except marvelous!! -Methos

On Tuesday December 16th, 2003, purr_verse (1423) writes:

This is fantastic!! Excellent rhyme/rhythm, and I especially love both "break for a smile as/we drift through denial" and "you leave your impression/my pseudo confession". Just Excellent! :) purr

On Tuesday December 16th, 2003, suicideseason (2103) writes:

wow...fucking awesome!i'll come back when i am no longer mystified...~season

On Tuesday December 16th, 2003, suicideseason (2103) writes:

ok,im back.the way you make the words dance off the page...it's truly poetry in motion.this is so powerful and beautiful. excellent flow,too! i do so enjoy your work. :)~season

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