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"A Dream Yet Realized" by AlluringDescent_darkbride

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Touching, touch, touched
So close but too far away to feel
That one, that thing, it
That nobody knows is real

Emotion, motionless, moving
Swayed by the breeze
Comfortable, comfort, comforting
But no one really believes

Silencing, silence, silenced
Whispered lies of shame
Enraptured, engrossed, entranced
This thing without a name

Rising, rise, arose
By any name would smell as sweet
Running, ran, have trodden
These painful roads of deceit

Sparkling, sparkle, sparkled
Dancing within it's domicile
Promising, promise, promised
That it would visit awhile

Charming, charm, charmed
This fickle dream did tell
Dreaming, dream, dreamed
Well that is just as well




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On Monday October 13th, 2003, Silver Spectre (90) writes:
I have to agree i love the structure of this poem. For me, poetry his hard to stay disciplined in your structure and say what you want to say.. you do it so well here~Silver~


On Wednesday September 17th, 2003, Chameleon (120) writes:
Let me add to the commenting frenzie...I truly enjoyed this; a very refreshing perspective.


On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:
Thanks :)


On Friday September 12th, 2003, Trichotillomaniac (49) writes:
I'm repeating everyone's comments, but the structure is amazing, and the words melt together so well, this is just another poem that could inspire me ;D


On Thursday September 11th, 2003, OLd SouL (833) writes:
loved the structure, enjoyable to read


On Thursday September 11th, 2003, worm (131) writes:
the triple word centerpiece beginning each stanza is a masters touch! a truly enjoyable read!


On Thursday September 11th, 2003, manywalks (947) writes:
Exactly, what worm said, that caught me right off. A joy indeed. ~ mw


On Thursday September 11th, 2003, GothicBlack (266) writes:
ya me too. very well written. ~gothic~


On Thursday September 11th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
:o) this was great... the structure is awsome.. I stand ashamed under your writing power.. Monkey



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