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No you’re not a prude
And no you’re not a pansy
But for some, sex means nothing



You see, I once cared a great deal about who I gave it to
I use to care a great deal about a lot of things
I waited
And waited
For that one special moment
And I was not let down
For that moment came
Yet it was not as I had thought
But I was in love
The one I had waited for and would never leave



That first time meant something to me
As it does most people
I gave the one thing that only one could have
No more, no less
It was my gift to my love



And it was used
And abused
And confused in what it was
Yes, I was in love and the favor was returned
For a little while…



And then it was twisted
Mutilated
Openly displayed for what I thought it would never be
A FUCK
So my “love-making” was humiliated
And my heart’s flame stomped out



So what do I think of waiting for the right one now?
What’s the point?
My opinion on the matter is such:

Life is brutal, life is pain
Life is one big fucking game

And my view of Love Making?
I done it before, and I’ll do it again
Sex doesn’t mean anything to me
Because my love for someone is not and will never be
Shown to them by what I’ll do to them



But please, don’t change your views
Because I got screwed
I am but one of many in this wonderful world
And not all turn out like me
So please, believe in love
Please, trust in love
Because once that trust in love is taken away
You lose your faith in the world
And become like me
Detached
Shaken
And stirred
A stiff drink for the broken hearted



Inspired by Casual WHAT? By nonhero_until_death
Casual WHAT? is truly a great poem, and it gives a new light on this sore subject



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On Wednesday June 11th, 2008, Winter Born (166) writes:
Life is brutal and life is pain... Though Life is beauty and life is gain as well... it took me a long time to learn how to skew my perspective till I saw that... Great write. and no I don't think he is a pansey either...perhaps naive...


On Sunday January 14th, 2007, beautifulfallenangel (108) writes:
make you want to trust again, if you're lucky, they'll be it, but ilove this write, we all get fucked over in the end.....:)


On Sunday January 14th, 2007, beautifulfallenangel (108) writes:
your right,"Please, trust in love Because once that trust in love is taken away You lose your faith in the world", and this is a chilling though awesome write, but i've found that someone can come along, maybe once in a blue moon, and change it, make


On Sunday December 24th, 2006, alaskanamber (140) writes:
in the end the only way me and my ex emotional connected was i bed where we could put words aside and communicate through our touch. are the only good memories I have of the last years


On Friday November 10th, 2006, mywristshurt (530) writes:
when i lost it to my ex, everything was great.. but he did the same thing to me, and just used me time and time again.. i know only so well what you mean in this poem.. its a great write and very powerful


On Tuesday June 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (19) writes:
so sad and so true.....i wish people wouldn't take others for granted like that- summer


On Friday February 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:
i totally agree with you, i know exactly how you feel, the situation i just got out of but am still kindof in is like this one my love got used and abused but i still go back for more...


On Wednesday February 9th, 2005, Chimauron (127) writes:
There is no greater thrill, no greater stress reliever, and no greater way to have fun than a good old fashioned casual fuck. But it would still be nice to have something meaningful for a change... nice work :)


On Wednesday December 8th, 2004, Clerik (49) writes:
Grow up.


On Saturday October 9th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:
Wow.


On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (131) writes:
* 'making love' really is.Until then...sex can still be enjoyed :)


On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (131) writes:
I dont think ive commented about this and i cant believe i havent...my first time...perfect time,perfect place,thought was perfect person but i was wrong...this reminded me a lil of me...still I hope one day ill meet someone who will show me what 'making


On Tuesday May 11th, 2004, aXe FactoR (429) writes:
message conveyed is very heartfelt & straight to the point. could see your emotions flowing within. great write!


On Friday April 9th, 2004, SilencedAngel (61) writes:
Intensly personal. Described most of my sexual experence. Very well written and makes me want to read more of your work.


On Wednesday April 7th, 2004, Forever Cold (48) writes:
very well done...


On Friday March 12th, 2004, Sky Singer (212) writes:
::memories come flooding back:: ...yeah. something like that. i've read this before, and now in reading it for waht seems the 100th time, i realize, this could have been me... and i'm so glad i didn't give up on love like i wanted to. excellent write.


On Tuesday January 6th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:
wow, to the point and so very true


On Thursday January 1st, 2004, An Expired Member (20) writes:
Very ineresting, lots of little tidbits in there to enjoy. Seems like there was more to it than its face value. Like the "stiff" drink in the last line, I saw it as an innuendo (sp?), which is what I loved about the poem.


On Wednesday November 19th, 2003, An Expired Member (6) writes:
ouch! one way i wish i neva i read this cuz it struck home "deep" yet it was amazing all the same. xx b.s xx


On Friday October 3rd, 2003, Loneal (118) writes:
... ouch. Memories can still be brutal, especially if one tends to question who twisted what and in whose mind ... I'm still wondering if it was just me ... good write ...~L


On Monday September 29th, 2003, Drea (937) writes:
wow...sad part is i know that side of love. i have also been on the other side of that kind of love. *sighs* this work took me back to a place i never though i would go back to. great write. ~Drea~


On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
Yeah, I've been told by a close friend that I have a serious issue with sex now. My reply was "no, you think?"


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, SilentStalker (1336) writes:
I've been there before, but I still think there's a chance for us...I hope...


On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
Me too


On Saturday September 20th, 2003, IceDragoness (251) writes:
this was definately food for thought


On Thursday September 11th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:
This was a fantastic poem...being used and twisted can make a distraught piece in which you've displayed hear...it's a sad thing to happen to anybody+Fallen Angel+


On Sunday September 7th, 2003, RepulsiveAttraction (111) writes:
i loved every bit of that.


On Tuesday September 9th, 2003, Trichotillomaniac (49) writes:
I really love this poem, it inspired one of my better ones :) Thanks A LOT!


On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, HeLlSeND (58) writes:
In a respect this poem is fantastic, but i gave mine freely just because, as with anything if you build it up....it will fall hard


On Friday August 29th, 2003, worm (131) writes:
ok... now tell us how you REALLY feel... LOL... this is as honest a bit of writing as I've ever seen! (god, I hope THAT made sense!) this is a good one! worm


On Thursday August 28th, 2003, Bloody_Hands (29) writes:
amazing ~Lynne


On Wednesday August 27th, 2003, nonhero_until_death (167) writes:
Good poem. I like to hear all sides of perspective on subjects. It has been awhile since I wrote Casual WHAT? my perspective has changed a little. however I still do not strive for only one thing. :P good write. :)


On Wednesday August 27th, 2003, Bast (902) writes:
wow... see... i've been to both sides... and i scorned making love until very recently... but sometimes... i think a passionate fuck filled with the energy of love is explosive... never say never. :)


On Monday August 25th, 2003, nell (328) writes:
wow, this is full of brutal honesty. I used to be likethis since my first time got raped from me, for a long time afterwards i didn't care anymore about what sex meant


On Monday August 25th, 2003, nell (328) writes:
and it took me five long years to find someone who i trully love and who taught me what it was to make love and not to simply fuck.great piece my heart goes out to you


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Six-Out (1822) writes:
It's a harsh look at what many ignore. Great write bride, shows everyone the darker side to love.


On Monday August 25th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (990) writes:
"Life is brutal, life is pain Life is one big fucking game" Great lines in a great write. I wish my first time had meant something more to me but I guess I knew it would be cheapened more each following time. ~Urban Shipwreck~



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