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My forever night

Vivid dreams of abominations
Ripping and tearing through your mind
Raging beasts and anathemas
Ashamed that they’re your kind
Don’t deny what you’re becoming
Don’t hide what you feel
The hunger and danger within you
Don’t say that it’s not real

Come with me a little closer
Let me introduce you to my black night
And you will stay here forever
It won’t hurt if you don’t fight

Dance the dark waltz of tomorrow
Your painful memories will be no more
You’ll be one with the darkness of eternity
You know that’s what you’re dying for
So don’t bitch to me about you anger
Don’t cry to me about you pain
If you decide that I’m not worthy
I’ll let you drown in your crimson rain

Come with me a little closer
Let me introduce you to my black night
And you will stay here forever
It won’t hurt if you don’t fight

My child, my love, my immortal
Fall in me tonight
Stop this old heart from bleeding tears
Show my dark your light

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On Saturday August 23rd, 2003, An Expired Member (13) writes:

Like the theme. Seducing to the night. "Dance the dark waltz of tommorow..." great poetic line. ~true

On Thursday August 21st, 2003, An Expired Member (16) writes:

Great writing, I enjoyed this poem like the rest of the poems you write

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, _Andrew_ (298) writes:

so far im likin all that i read :D "I’ll let you drown in your crimson rain" very nice, *~*aNDReW*~*

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:

Well well, I liked the poem...and I liked the ending...I guess that means I like this whole thing. Good job.

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

hey wow. your deep. and i like how natural the rhyming came out. some people force the words to come, but you expressed it with a very descriptive ease. good job. keep writing how you feel. -aulie

On Tuesday August 19th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:

Ah touching in a most dark way. Your writes are always splendid.Hence you shall have my attention.-Kefka

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