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you tell me you blame it on the sun
for shining too bright
blame it on the light
you cannot look straight through your eyes
that's one way to go blind .. well hey ..
for someone who has run out of any charm
one cheap smile of yours disarms
the tissues of my heart
and that's another way to go blind ..and then . .
everything falls apart
the self-control i was maintaining
the erect posture i thought of sustaining
it's the end of sanity, it's the start
I say blame it on the kids
that were laughing outside
for spreading doses of happiness too wide
dumbness I missed wrapped in one single kiss
Blame it on the will to live
my hands are shaking, thought of pronouncing them dead
my corpse breathing looking for my head
have to deny, cannot believe .. .but i . .
cannot close my eyes
Blame it on the sun
for shining too bright
Blame it on my finger
for being too small
for something so obvious as being in love

won't you blame your falling on me?
i'll pick you up ...i'll swallow you whole





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On Sunday December 5th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
Well said. I miss reading your lovely masterpieces. I really liked the perspective you put on this. You really nailed your point.


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
Beautiful piece! Great concept, really well portrayed. I love the ending.


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
This flows so fluidly. I want to quote so many lines from this. However, my comment would be longer than the poem itself :P Suffice it to say I loved it.


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
I can especially relate to "everything falls apart the self-control i was maintaining the erect posture i thought of sustaining it's the end of sanity, it's the start"



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