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My sorry eyes
won't finish to explain
the way I watch
this broken home again
inside of me
this is what i don't feel
taking over me
this is what i built
falling under
me

If there's a way around
to see you
the way that i used to
show me again
the view i let it fade
the soul you let it change
and while i have someone else to hold
i still can feel the cold

I draw a picture of you
coffee stains your face
I write a song of you
my voice it starts to break
"to hold you is a dream
to see you an illusion
but when i hear you coming I know
it's not you
it's not us
it's this wind that comes and says
'hello' "

don't want you anymore
don't want this to grow
don't feel you anymore

it's the denial phase
forevermore

In my mind
you are wearing
the last thing you ever wore
In my mind
I release you

so why won't you just go ?



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On Friday November 19th, 2004, darkleprechaun (69) writes:
every true romantic has atleast one of those... this muse you speak of i mean... well done... i have come to expect nothing less now... thank you


On Friday October 15th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
"the view i let it fade the soul you let it change" - i love this couplet... The title, and how it's used within the piece, is also very well done. lovely write.


On Friday October 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (58) writes:
i really dig the writing style of this piece..the short sentences spears directly into the heart..


On Friday October 15th, 2004, Choronzon (233) writes:
Makes me so sad.


On Friday October 15th, 2004, slow.burn.star (99) writes:
soft. petals. of. grey...xxx


On Thursday October 14th, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (552) writes:
this poem reads like the person you wrote it for is dead


On Thursday October 14th, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:
i can never find the words to describe how your work touches me...just know that it does, in the most gentle and beautiful way...


On Thursday October 14th, 2004, evolve (2246) writes:
*sigh* Loverly.



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