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Colored skies
Carpet stains
You were here
I feel you
Again

Just yesterday we were
Laughing at the corner
Of that place
With flowers and cameras
Flashing each of our face

I remember just everything . .
I’d forget if I had the mind to do so
Just because it breaks me again and again ..
I go with the flow

Never knew you’d be gone so soon
November turned in december
taking you

to whisper a word of goodbye
is not for me
so i said take care
hope things go your way

your face like “too bad”
it’s hellish sad . .. .
i dont whisper goodbyes
so i hope you do take care
and i pray the sun’s shining your day

i’ll be seeing you soon
just for the better

thousand years later



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On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (359) writes:
"to whisper a word of goodbye /is not for me "...i really felt those words...your way of expressing is so tender, it feels comforting to read from you...-l-


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, girlafraid (577) writes:
your words are so delicate...but the underlying emeotion, what feels to be like anger and even a sense of abandonment, is too powerful to ignore..


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, Northstar (453) writes:
ahhhh that deep painful goodbye without being a complete goodbye is so beautifully expressed here--and I know it well--excellent job


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, Anth (1571) writes:
i really felt this one,delicate and beautifully expressed


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, Lydia Jade (783) writes:
its a very soft write though the softness hides the exploding emotion....you are talented to say the least


On Saturday August 28th, 2004, batman nipples (2241) writes:
Quite a read...whispers of nostalgia...a lovely write...thank you.



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