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To Love

I would love it if you came,
just as you are
designed by this imperfect world
with your dimples and the way
you stare.
I don't want to know about
your complicated ways
the stupid games
are not for me to play.
It used to be so simple . .
to say you'd love someone
until you already did
until you did.
I won't live this way..
hurried by your pace
dictated by time
judged
by what's your face.
I won't listen to this silence
clinging through my ear
It used to be so simple
to know i'd love someone
until I did.
I miss the you
that never was
I miss the me
that never is
And I'D love to love you
but i already did.

The world has gone wrong
ugly since so long
I couldn't see
through this fog.. .
there was no hope ---------------
only this
love

only love

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On Saturday June 21st, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (690) writes:

Rings some harsh truths, this does... I love it.

On Sunday February 10th, 2008, An Expired Member (40) writes:

Wow. "Judged by what's your face" Why do I relate to that line so much? Hmmph. Anyways, back to reality. That was amazing. Took me to another place.

On Thursday June 28th, 2007, Rebell tiGer King (545) writes:

kick ass every time i read it -smph-

On Monday September 12th, 2005, An Expired Member (2) writes:

wow that was touching!!!!

On Saturday October 16th, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (180) writes:

Very Touching. Too Much. GPhD.

On Wednesday June 30th, 2004, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

the pathways that you show us are so intrisic and internal to you, there seems to be a tenderness that you impart to your word, showing an honesty few articulate or dare to show......well done.........urban

On Monday June 28th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

This is very touching and it's depth is endless. It portrays a heartfelt and clean emotion that only you could capture. Absolutely beautiful.

On Sunday June 27th, 2004, glasshouse (771) writes:

Wow. This piece was so... piercing. Tragic and sincere. Honest. I felt it deeply and I loved every word of it... and I hated it's utter truth. Great job. -Glass

On Monday June 21st, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:

I don't know what to say.. after all of the comments I've left you, this one gives me trouble. I think the subject matter is too intense for me to recognize.. I'm weak that way.

On Monday June 21st, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:

Everyone of your writes has a distinct feeling to it... Its wildly intriguing with a tinge of mystery. I love getting to know you through your writes. :::OLd

On Monday June 21st, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

so rad is this piece, i read it 3 times..the feelings conjured is over-whelming...it eats away the light until only a lurking tinge of sadness remains.awesome. -MeL-

On Monday June 21st, 2004, Six-Out (1799) writes:

maddin...this shocked me...I sit here nearly in tears, yet so full of something I don't know. This one is going to my favs list...maybe one of the million times I'm sure to read it, I'll leave an adequate comment.

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