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On the day i die you'll know
that you will never see me again
yet you will feel my soul
caressing every pain you gain.

On the day i die you'll know
you did not give to me enough
that you could give much more
when mostly you played tough.

On the day i die you'll know
i was in 2 things very right:
that i'd be the first one to go
and that you'd miss me that night.

On the day i die you'll know
you will never love as you did
you will never kiss as you did before
there will be a missing thing you need.

On the day i die you'll know
you should've said what you didn't say
and praying won't make me come
and crying won't take regret away.

On the day i die you'll know
it was me who you loved the most
and realize, until then, that i'm gone
that you'll have to love a ghost.
 
On the day i die you'll know
you should've forgiven that day
when i begged you for so long
yesterday i stood, but that day there i'll lay.

On the day i die you'll know
nothing will be ever the same
love or you will stop to grow
you will try to forget my name.

On the day I die you'll know
there is a promise as to never be apart
you'll lean to me and place a rose,
stare into my face and know you killed my heart.

ON THE DAY I DIE I'LL KNOW
YOU'LL TRY TO THROW ME AGAIN
AND FROM DEATH I WILL SEE,
BUT THIS TIME WITH NO PAIN.




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On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, XxDarkPhilosopherxX (3) writes:
This is one of the most amazing poems I've seen! Absolutely amazing!


On Monday December 26th, 2005, weyvern (103) writes:
brings a tear to the eye! it is a well plotted, beautifuly written and i can picture someone saying this! very good


On Wednesday September 21st, 2005, An Expired Member (57) writes:
I liked it for the fact that it has such... satisfying feeling of what has happend in the past


On Tuesday September 7th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:
wow... hard hitting at the end, like you finally just screamed it out in pent up rage. this is great, i really love the repeted line throuought, makes for beautiful flow and continuity. i like the gentility(sp?) of the voice, speaking all those hurtful th


On Sunday August 22nd, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:
wow, amazing


On Tuesday August 10th, 2004, Lydia Jade (790) writes:
what can i say to this...nothing....im speachless...such sorrow within these words...


On Friday July 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:
Wow.. Amazing.. Just amazing....


On Thursday June 10th, 2004, smurfalwaz (17) writes:
Wow...this is really good...I started to tear up...it was very touching.


On Thursday June 10th, 2004, frost bite (48) writes:
oooh man, that ending rocked, wow.. it all lead up to such a great end. Definatly a great poem.


On Wednesday November 26th, 2003, Velvet_Raventon (695) writes:
Oh beautifully written, I understand why it is in the top 10 % (where I found it). Keep writing, Velvet.


On Sunday August 17th, 2003, Drea (934) writes:
the words touched me.. Great read ~Drea~


On Friday August 15th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:
Damn, the last stanza ends it all quite nicely..I should have read your work long ago.-Kefka


On Thursday June 26th, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:
Wow! You diffenitly do have a way with words and I know exactly how you feel. I wish I could say it like you did. You are quite amazing.


On Saturday May 24th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:
Oh, very compelling. This does not only make your point so very clear and poignat...but it also makes the reader consider who they have treated like drin. Great work here.~DW~


On Sunday April 27th, 2003, An Expired Member (37) writes:
clap clap clap!! i raise my glass of blood to thee..awesome job--melorra


On Monday April 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:
I agree with darkness_descends 100%


On Sunday March 16th, 2003, darkblue (3) writes:
everyone could send this out to their "special no one" :D *hint hint* Jeremy *hint hint*


On Tuesday March 25th, 2003, darkness_descends (15) writes:
You should never take love for granted because as quickly as it was found it can disappear and leave eternal pain and regret in it's place. Great job! ~Darkness~


On Tuesday February 25th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
You never know what you had until it's gone... If they could only ache as we do...



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