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A Place To Stand

I find you in the place i left,
the place of no return
where you were kept
and your fire always burn.
The place i do recall,
your face is blurry as hell
where i had thrown my all
in a hole in which i fell.
Can you find yourself in here?
Could you differ from the rest?
My shoulders still carry your fears...
My will still believes i did my best.
Your name is no one
Your existance is fading fast
Somehow an ending has begun
since such a distant past.
I wish to wish nothing
except to have wind in between my hands,
and for you to someday bring
a place where i can stand.

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On Tuesday January 25th, 2005, Alec Pure (334) writes:

you put a lot of emotion in this one i like it

On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

good write..its so...openy, i cant describe...btw.is ur last name madden??udont have to answer but jst curious ok later...~~drunk trag guy

On Thursday June 10th, 2004, frost bite (48) writes:

I love the emotion put into each of your writes, 'Your name is no one Your existance is fading fast' i love it, just the right words in the midst of an already awesome write. *captain frost*

On Sunday February 8th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (361) writes:

your poetry seems so natural,beautiful and free...just like you are(reference to pic)...-l-

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

great write, i'm a little late in reading it, heh, but great none the less

On Monday January 5th, 2004, An Expired Member (6) writes:

lossing love sucks when you've done the best you know to do. good write

On Monday November 10th, 2003, urbanhumility (1362) writes:

a foward and gracious begining...your minds virtue is fair.......well spoken....urban

On Friday September 12th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:

Wonderful. Loved the entire piece. Well thoughtout. I too like the line 'to have wind in between my hands'...

On Friday August 15th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Beautiful..Looking forward to reading more of your works..-Kefka

On Thursday August 14th, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (985) writes:

Seems like a sad burden to bear. "My shoulders still carry your fears...." I really enjoyed this piece. ~Urban Shipwreck~

On Wednesday July 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (9) writes:

I'm in love with "i wish to wish nothing"

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (599) writes:

A place to stand seems like such a simple want...absolutely abysmal...that being said...there is nothing left for me to say. ~DW~

On Monday April 14th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

Very nicely written. I think its a beautiful piece of art.

On Monday March 17th, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

let me agree with the others ,.. combind they're comments and you have mine

On Wednesday March 12th, 2003, cre (508) writes:

I like this, great to read and full of thought. Good write.

On Tuesday March 11th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (748) writes:

"to have wind in between my hands" - very intriguing notion! Ciao, T/S

On Thursday February 6th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

nice cadence

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