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She's painted in plastic threads
she is me
and she wishes
she bends
Fire is inside the soul
it doesn't burns
it just aches
from the time she is born
till the last mistake
Is it what matters
to shine and to grow?

Her picture is my face
and I can't remember
where she's been misplaced
A fossil-like existence
Her eyes are childlike
they still hope in for something
they still live in to see
waiting maKes her wonder
wonder makes her need

Now there's only breathing
air that leaves from me
She's painted in plastic threads
colors blue and red
Her soul is cage-less
and has no end
Her voice is my sound now
childlike again

There's running
and laughter
she is me
and she falls
there's no editing in words
She's plastic, she bends
there's nothing
Not anything
A band-aid
can't mend.




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On Monday April 12th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (361) writes:
this poem invokes vivid images of childhood...once again, you are brilliant...and i agree with purr_verse regarding that verse..it's also my favorite...awesome...-l-


On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:
fantastic... your mind is a veritable treasure chest of wonder. I had the same thought as OLd. I am in awe. Fox


On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
great imagery, both original and vivid... a poignantly emotional piece with a fantastic conclusion...soft and painful simultaneously... and i really love "waiting maKes her wonder wonder makes her need" especially. :)


On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
wow, most enjoyable, the emotion is radiant in every word.~~~Grave


On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, girlafraid (579) writes:
it just aches from the time she is born till the last mistake... wow...new favorite...this one made me smile, remembering that childhood simplicity...*afraid*


On Tuesday March 23rd, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:
'She's painted in plastic threads' Where do you come up with this stuff? This one amazes me... I've read it like 5 times so far.. :::OLd



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