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Let me drown
in this
forever

Forever are the
years I carry
and this love
forever
stays

Emotions sink
in
and
I feel
No more

There
up high
through the stars
I see a friend
lose spark
over me

I think
it was the moment
I blinked
and I disintegrated
myself into
the vast of
reality

And what is truly real?
For me
It's only the sea

Only the waves
that crash ...
And there I
felt you there
like it was
forever
but I blinked
and my clock
stung
like bad weather

you are too much
of a person
you are..

And I am
so ungrateful
to drift
just like that

to say I won't
come back ..

I wanted to ...

But this sea is
taking over me
this is real
this is real

Let me drown
alone
and take away
this crown
you've placed over my head
never mine in the
first place ..

Forever is the
palid of your face
Your eyes
like sky

they

spark.







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On Monday April 12th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (349) writes:
are the goddess of sincererity...your words always pertaining a certain sweet melancholy with a powerful sense of honesty..."And what is truly real? / For me /It's only the sea" ...these lines captured me...a wondeful write, indeed...-l-


On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
It's so relieving to see that you're able to continue writing in such a beautiful and truthful fashion. It's good to see that you still shine through as a leading example of great poetry.


On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
Your choice of words and emotion in this feel very sincere and powerful. You capture that certain emotion that reflects a deep sense of understanding. Always wonderful reading from you.


On Friday March 19th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:
'Only the waves that crash ...'.. I loved that verse. Your writing is so unique. You word feelings in a way I would have never dreamt of. Once again.. I relate to the opposite side you are referring to. Wonderful, hun. :::OLd


On Thursday March 18th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
wonderful write, most enjoyable.~~~Grave



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